get john battleborn and the whitemane chick to join as pawns
really great story onlything holding you back is the gramer. some points of the story are just unreadable. please get some form of editing
"Well Minister," Harry said as he stood up and swung his foot as hard as possible in-between his victim's legs. "I would like you to meet Peter Pettigrew." Harry said as he hit Pettigrew with a body bind and stomped on his groin. "Now, remember when I said Sirius Black was innocent, remember that? I do. We should probably talk about that now." Harry said as he casually re-stomped the groin.
Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver
+1
1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse
Anime & Comics · illyisabot
dont know what i expected. MC is bascaly all others. only thinking with his lower brain. like all other storys started really good but then it became wifu pokemon again. plot is a slow burn romance is forced and it is becoming very perdictable. so after 100 chaps im am gonna stop this as it is no longer fun to read.
i get people hating the british musiume and all but most of those relics would not be found if the bridish hadent funded the digs, expeditions and so on.
"Hey, this is the cultural propriety of another race. Do you think I would have the face to do something like that?" I ask in fake outrage "Who do you think I am? The British Museum?"
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
send a team to earth to mess with megatron and prime
well another good story gone.
hello aurthor. enjoying ur story do u have a release schedual.
HP: The Achiever
Book&Literature · FT_Rhino