TeaDragon1

TeaDragon1

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Hey guys, I am just starting out with writing novels. Please tell me if there are any improvements that I can make! Other than that, I hope you enjoy! -TeaDragon

2018-04-12 入りました Australia
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TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to RandomIsGood

It will be explained soon.

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Should_Be_Working

I did not want his spirit manipulation abilities to be overpowered at the start as that would limit his growth. After he levels up (level 3), he will be exploring creative methods like this.

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Vito_Crodell

This is definitely something that I have begun considering. From about chapter 33 onwards, a new character will be introduced that will stimulate Ren's development. As for the 'magnets' idea. I will definitely consider integrating it into Ren's abilities later in the story. Thanks for the feedback.

[Ding! You have gained the skill 'Spirit Compression'! Your Spirit has increased!]

World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)

World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · TeaDragon1

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Frizent

Gracias por los comentarios.

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Jso7474

Good try. This is definitely an AU but it is not set in the past. There is a very good reason for why the Pokemon were hatched on the beach (Arceus did not spawn them and they were not randombly left there). Everything will be explained later. Continue Reading!

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to CockroaChan

I just added a level (I changed that to a times now) so that you can differentiate between different amounts of compression. For example: x1 = Compression 1 time x2 = Compression 2 times - stronger and more powerful This is a made up skill.

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Phoenix_Paradise

His potential does not follow conventional logic. In order to account for any changes to his race and other skills that he has, I have decided to not include potential.

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Phoenix_Paradise

The scaling of pokemon in this world will be different. This is so that when Ren becomes really long, other pokemon do not seem too short.

It was a large bipedal pokemon. Its body was about 2 meters tall. Its limbs were thick and bulging.

World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)

World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · TeaDragon1

TeaDragon1
TeaDragon1
3 years ago
Replied to Endless_Suffering

There are two reasons for the difference in skills. 1. As I have stated in my Auxilary Chapter, this fanficition is a blend of Pokemon with the HunterxHunter power system. I did this to give the pokemon a larger variety of moves. 2. This is a fanfiction, not the original. Limiting each pokemon to their Original skills would not only limit the fights but also make these fights more predictable. This is why I allowed them to learn skills that they would not ordinarily use while also including my own original skills. I am sorry if this upset you. As for the Pokemon sizes, this is another change that I made, to make Ren's progress more dicernable (greater improvements every time he levels up). In the future, when Ren becomes extremely long, it would not make sense for all the other pokemon to be their original heights. I do not think I was clear enough about this. I will add a note in the first few chapters, explaining what this fan fiction is, so that new readers do not get confused. I will also try to incorporate more moves from the original into this fanficition to make it more appealing. Thank you for the feedback, TeaDragon1.

  • World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction) original

    World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM LEVELUP EVOLUTION POKEMON

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    Ren woke up in the world of Pokemon without any memories... as an Ekans (Snake pokemon). A truly ridiculous premise. Or perhaps the start of a legend. Join Ren as he explores the world around him, struggles to survive and finds out more about who he is. ___________________________________________________________ If you would like to get chapters in advance: Patréon: https://www.Patreon.com/TeaDragon1 This fiction is set in an Alternate Universe (AU). Note: This cover is not mine. Credit goes to original creator.

    57 Chs 4.7k お気に入り

  • Edge original

    Edge

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    'The power of the mind is infinite.' Rye had only one goal in life... to reach the pinnacle of knowledge. A game. A death match. It could be either one of the things but for Rye... it was an opportunity... An opportunity to each the pinnacle!

    5 Chs 5 お気に入り

  • Being reincarnated as a slime is really hard... original

    Being reincarnated as a slime is really hard...

    Fantasy

    Amadeus Rye cannot remember his past. He cannot remember if he had a job or a family. All he knows is that he was reincarnated in another world... As the weakest monster. It's going to be a tough life. ----------------------------------------------- Hey guys, I am a new author and this is one of my first works. Please rate me and tell me if there is anything I can improve on... Thanks, Sakith1 *Art does not belong to me. All credit goes to its artist.

    13 Chs 163 お気に入り