TravelingWolf21

Thanks for the chapter and interesting story. I ask that you consider stop with any future use of "my boy" in regards to mc. I come across to many "my boy" this and that in the fics I read today and I get annoyed every time. This is a personal prefrense of course and thought, no harm in asking.

Start of this chapter you write that Ron is asking Lucas if he have seen Harry on the train and at the end of the chapter you write that Harry and Ron still came crashing in the flying car. How did Holly arrive at Hogwarts?

Instead of Granger on the wall, I think it usually is written on a mailbox.

Thank you for the story so far. Will Ayumi gain her memories from previous life?

Thought he was better than this. Hiding things in the closet is what teenagers did in the 90's. When she asks if he was out of the house and the perfume? Say "Yes, I have 'needs' Peggy".

Thank you for the chapter. Like the story. Hope Laxus gets a beat down at some point so he knows, Alfonze isen't his servant.

No problem with Nami being the girl, as long she doesn't stop him from killing their enemies in the future.

Thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter and writing the story. Her name cold be Sara.