I think you could take a more informal, conversational tone for her self narration- unless she's supposed to sound a little stiff. I'll keep reading and see how the flow changes over time and try to give a bit more detailed feedback.
"Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light."
huh I now understand a joke in ch760 of legendary mechanic. Thanks!
Is an animal trainer who doesn't want to be a fortune-teller a bad clown?
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
The horror movie continues with a 'no don't go in there' sequence. Something is really off with Shang and his rationalisation.
Ah ha! Something as strange and complex as the cluster hall doesn't seem like an inherent constant part of the universe, so it was made by someone or something...
I know this is a reference, and it feels like a throwaway gag, but does this imply that there was an impression of awakened/beyonder traits in the general subconscious/ common mythos before the calamity?
That is horrifyingly hilarious. Is this what it means to listen to your heart?
He's not locked in there with it, it's locked in with him!
How much more dangerous can things even get...
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original The Dragon Mogul and the last Hero
Magnus Magnusson was the greatest hero. Even two hundred years after he vanished, his stories and image are ingrained in the popular culture of the modern world. Peerless, Fearless- the undefeated champion of the chaotic times before the rise of industry and corporate nations. Azura has long left behind the days of sleeping on a pile of gold to head a massive multinational empire of enterprise. But despite having enough wealth and power to be at the peak of her life, there is something or someone lacking. This is inspired heavily by shadowrun. Dragon CEO's, magic and fantasy, corporate espionage.4 Chs 0 お気に入り
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From Fire Life
Lyra spends her days working peacefully at a roadside inn in a dusty town, content with using her incredible reflexes and quick thinking for nothing more than stopping drunks skipping on their tabs. But she won't be for much longer. Destiny is going to come knocking and it's hand takes the shape of a particularly infamous rogue mage. Soon she'll learn there's more to the world and herself than she ever imagined.8 Chs 1 お気に入り
- original
The Final Catalyst.
An aspiring engineer's destiny changes when men attempt to rob 'the Dragon's Stone' from her- But, she's never even heard of it!17 Chs 9 お気に入り
Um, they were able to get close to the ozone layer before having their brains blasted out, so surely they could just figure out the surface area by the curvature of the horizon ?
When they tried to deduce the Other World's surface area based on the gravity, tides, the planet's rotation, and orbital revolution, their guess was that it was about the same as Earth or even larger.
Oh My God! Earthlings are Insane!
Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow