joky

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2018-04-03 入りました Global
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joky
joky
8 months ago
Replied to Ye_Wuchen_4460

Yup it's really confusing. Then they kept changing between English name and Chinese name. Might as well read the mtl

joky
joky
11 months ago
Commented

Did they forget about their mother?

joky
joky
1 years ago
Posted

Let's go with the good first: = the story is great - it's about introducing technology to medieval world that have some level of fantasy = not that technical - most of the time author just explain 1 aspect then continue the story = a bit like slice of life - not too many inside problem, most of the time mc just try to solve outside his kingdom problem, the problem inside the kingdom usually solve by introducing more technology Now the bad stuff: = editor - this novel seriously need a good editor, too many misspelled or wrong choice of word, there also grammar problem but not major in my problem, even mc name sometimes misspelled, this is really big problem that want me to stop reading the novel = ending of an arc - some of the arc just end abruptly, there is no aftermath details

joky
joky
3 years ago
Commented

This is the first time that I understand dust explosion

joky
joky
4 years ago
Commented

The ending is golden