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Nice

Thanks for the chapter

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Good

To be honest, I'm not enjoying this story as much as I did at the beginning. every two steps these angels appear and do what they want, to the point where you start to suspect if they are not the mc or if the title of the story is wrong (for example, "angels in the world of HP"). To the point where Harry and others and their actions don't make sense in the story/world and how much angels are involved. angels should control, demand, and do what they want and follow the points they think, because they are there at every step). It's tiring for me. but good luck and congratulations with your writing and story, it's just not for me.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Nice

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Good chapter

Thanks for the chapter

wow, how weak. mc is a natural alpha, and peter just became an alpha and yet, he beat up mc. I don't understand