Will take note... Appreciate the feedback.
I agree with the tiger thing. But, I haven't yet decided upon the spirit beast aspect. The story is growing on its own as time progresses and hence I am keeping my options open at this point...
Ha ha ha... I had the same thought flash by as I wrote drinking scenes. I thought it was only my mind that thought like that. Maybe, I will try to diversify a bit. Thanks for the input.
Duncan usually didn't care much about jewelry or weapons that most other people cared about. His mind was always on wine. But, it didn't mean that he was ignorant of the various top-rated items present in the world.
Demon Immortal
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks. I hope the following chapters give you the same enjoyment
Nah, not happening... I can give an author's guarantee on that...
Duncan wasn't sure why he felt that way. It was an instinct to be honest to not let go off his sword when the deer had headbutted him. Just like how he had acted when he downed the wolf, this time was the same when the deer headbutted him. His instincts always guided him to act in the right way when he was in life and death situation.
Demon Immortal
Eastern · kirupakaran
Ah, there is a twist in it. Wasnt initially planned, but for convenience sale, I switched most names to Chinese for better flow. As for Duncan's name, a surprise is present in story, but it is a long wait...
Tang De told boggling Duncan altogether. He could hardly imagine how big they could be when he was told even small cities were dozen times bigger than the Starsinger Town he hailed from.
Demon Immortal
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks, I also like reading and writing about these enlightenment moments... However they are a chore to depict properly. Thoughts don't actually follow a set pattern. They jump from one thread to another. Especially when your mind is whirling fast. Trying to make them coherent was a little hardThanks for your appreciation
If that was the case, what ulterior motives did his master have? He had always known his master wasn't someone kind. There must be some reason for his master to act for a mortal. Moreover, his master's look when he walked out of the Grotto Heaven was telling as well. There was most likely to be something fishy regarding his disciplehood. What was it?
Demon Immortal
Eastern · kirupakaran
Ah, that was a decision that took me a long time to come to... At this stage, mc still has some misgivings from his mortal life. He hasn't completely shed his morality yet. He also hasn't completely embraced being a cultivator. As the story progresses, MC's character will change slowly and he will become more ruthless.
I felt that the bloodline has been used too frequently... Moreover these are fights within his capacity. In my mind, the MC must be forced to dig deep for him to activate his bloodline. At this stage, he still hasn't gotten full control over his bloodline and is only exploring the basics. But don't worry, the bloodline will be a major part as story progresses
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Supreme Soldier System
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Oh Heavens!!! Where Is My Cheat???
Ah! No Truck San! I am too young to die!!! BAM!!! Where am I? Wait a minute! Huh, new body, young and healthy, two sets of memories…. Huh, isn’t this reincarnation template? Then, what about cultivation? Yes! Yes! Yes! I have transmigrated to a cultivation world. Aha, here I come. I am gonna walk in the air. Behead demons and devils from thousand miles away with my flying sword. Create fireballs and lightning dragons out of thin air. Dine with immortal fairies. Faceslap my opponents!!! Whooohooo!!!! Ah, wait a minute! Where’s the grandpa that is supposed to guide me! Oi, grandpa! Come out. Where are you? What???!!! There are no systems too. What about magic treasures that help me level up? Why can’t I find anything? Oi Heavens! Where is my cheat?!!!!4 Chs 9 お気に入り
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An update will be coming in within the next week. I am planning to upload chapters in batches to ease the process.
Demon Immortal
Eastern · kirupakaran