*As she watched
As he watched Purple Wind's silhouette merge with the dark night beyond the doorway, Cyan River bit her lip in silence. Intrigue shrouded her thoughts Purple Wind enigmatic presence growing ever more compelling.
ファンタジー · Rqmk
*her comrades stupid autocorrect
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ファンタジー · Elyon
too bad it wasn't O'Doyle..
"Student Arthur Doyle greets Professor Constantine!"
ファンタジー · Esenel
Valentina isn't there?
"C-c-countess..." The word came out trembling, malformed, from the vampires' lips. The fear was palpable, an overwhelming presence that seemed to take over the atmosphere. Valentina Scarlet, the Countess, raised an eyebrow, assessing the beings in front of her with a mix of disdain and annoyance.
ファンタジー · Katanexy
*Fortis Dud
Before Fortus Rud, the owners of this painting had been ordinary people.
ファンタジー · Elyon
These are flowing just as well as the first chapters. Keep it up. Keep in mind that Harem does not mean orgy, threesome, ect. Keep the scenes to what you are comfortable with, and they should keep flowing easily.
I think it was well done. The initial play was well written and thought out. Both individuals are new, so a super screw fest wouldn't have been realistic. I do hope that more indepth chapters happen, however, they are not necessary if they flow like these two did.
*Anastasia? Aina is out cold.
Leonel stripped himself down as Aina prepared.
ファンタジー · Awespec
should this be Clearhearing?
I invoked [Clairhearing] beside the tiger princess, so I could hear various things.
Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyusoukyoku (WN)
ファンタジー · Harsh_Sharma_9110