The way Alicent speaks and thinks makes literally zero sense. How could a kid with no education who grew up on the streets have that great a vocabulary and speak as though she's in a play???? It makes some sense with Richard because of the extra memories, but otherwise this is definitely made by an AI that doesn't understand that Alicent should have a different tone from Richard.
Glossing over his first two centuries makes the story practically useless. The exploration, evolution and adaptation to his new form are lost.
Just treat the IQ as a superpower
nothing says he can't have an infinite IQ as a human with a wish...
Shouldn't he adapt to the hunger and then start not needing food?
Author did you forget that the symbiote heals? He shouldn't have any scars due to that.
The lack of drive to change anything in the MC makes him feel useless and gives me no reason to continue reading. THis would actually have been interesting if he decided to rule the humans and became the God Emperor of Mankind or something of the like. Such a wasted opportunity. He could have molded humanity into his own vision rather than just despair at how bad humans are.
What is this cringe? Just stop with the flirting between the MC and May. It's not working.
Looking forward to more!
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It still makes 0 sense. She speaks like she's Shakespeare when she's a tiny kid and she has grown up her entire life not knowing much. She would at least have a heavy accent.
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