YesEvil

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2018-03-06 入りました Australia
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YesEvil
YesEvil
2 years ago
Posted

Trust Webnovel to charge people to read something when there are a lot of sources out there for free which have over double the amount of chapters. As for the product? You get what you expect. It's alright, somewhat quick and forceful with progression which leaves me a bit unsatisfied but I've read less then 100 chapters. At least the MC is pretty ruthless.

YesEvil
YesEvil
2 years ago
Commented

Why are bits of the chapters in shambles now? There are paragraphs without spaces and needing a lot of work to make proper sense.

YesEvil
YesEvil
3 years ago
Posted

I've read this from start to finish and it is quite the ride for good and bad. As the book is complete you have nothing to fear in terms of updates. Basic quality of writing is abysmal for the first half of the book and a serious edit would do a world of good for the novel. The latter half of the book is in good nick. The savior of the first half of the book was the competent story, whilst not infallible, it was interesting enough to keep me reading. The unfortunate part is that whilst the writing quality improves in the second half, the story degrades quite severely. The second half is rushed and has been poorly planned by the author. Many things are taken in leaps and others are forgotten before being shrugged off later in a side note. Having just finished the book not even an hour ago I can confidently convey my disappointment for a book that promised much more. I hope that someone re-writes this one day as it could be so much greater than.... this. Is it worth a read? Give it a go. Is it worth finishing? Probably not.

YesEvil
YesEvil
3 years ago
Commented

Sweet TKA reference :)

Other than the Gourmets which was split into two teams under the two Sacred Teachers, the top 10 explorations teams, which attracted the most attention in this trip, included five teams under Leyson. They were the Phantom Squadron, the Red Spiders, the Seekers, the Blue Devil Squadron, and the Upside Down Squadron. These teams were the main force in the army that Leyson led in the northern battlefield. They received missions the past few days and frequently moved around, becoming the busiest teams among all the exploration teams who were there. Teams like the Swoksaar Squad, the Oceanic Beasts, and the Wanderlust Team were rather free during this period.

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