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2018-02-17 入りました France
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codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

The chapter isn't confusing because of the part about the past (I think it's actually quite clear), however you change the name of the characters too many times (Anna become Kanna, Ma-Ri is changed to Mi-Ra then to Mira), stick to one name only. Ps: tone down the exposition, the last paragraph is not natural at all.

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

I think he shouldn't be. He should be the manager (he has experience) and sometimes appear in streams but that's all. He don't strike as someone that would enjoy playing games while talking with the audience. He may do well in the "just chatting" category though. Anyway, I don't watch hololive but i enjoy your story, thanks for the chapter

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

GoodTimesWithScar want to know your location

He thought Minecraft would just be a fun game for people, but finding out that wheelchair users could freely walk around here would probably be of great help for those people in the future.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

I would have say that they have the images of the arson, but then I remembered, they don't, because they are as far apart from their brains as Alpha Centaurus is from the Earth. It may seem close, but when you look closely at it, you understand no connection can exist

The Director was a beast, he took a huge loss with it, and there was the case of Amon Tang that was not resolved. He now regrets having postponed it, after all, he wasn't a fool, he can guess that whoever did this was the culprit who wanted to frame Amon. However, now it's all burned.

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

No. Just, no. You will NOT make me believe that in a world where one can manipulate ELEMENTS, no protection against criminal attacks would be put in place. Plus, did they seriously don't have backups of the videos? Not necessarily backup of the entire system, but backup of the day someone created a rumor that could have resulted in the expulsion of a student? Even if only for convenience purpose? Like being able to show images to the students and professors? Not even for that? okay then... I feel like the universe is at play here. Oh... wait....

Soon they went out to see, and found that the surveillance room caught fire and everyone started to evacuate while those who could use water genetics helped put out the fire. All data from the security cameras, along with other things were lost.

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

I think every protest movement out there want to know how to do this (being a riot)

I can't help but get a little angry. Especially seeing this pompous bastard walk into the arena with his hands in his pockets. Who does he think he is? Tsk, what a riot!

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Replied to codmuri

broken as this

"We're in the finals!" The referee shouted with excitement: "I know that many are discouraged by the withdrawals from the fight, but now the 10 finalists have been decided. Keep an eye on the screen that will show the table of the ten finalists."

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

this is more than stupid. 10 people make it to the finals and you make the finals with only 2 win -> only 20 matches are enough to qualify everyone needed. BUT that is unlikely to happen, so let's say there are 4 classes (likely more) of 30 people (again, likely more), that make 120 students. Let's say there were 35 matches before the finals with 2 fighters each time, that is at most 60 people (10 finalist and 20 to fight them (20 fight), and 30 (15 fight) to complete the roaster(20+15=35, math checks out)) fighting. This means that as a student you have a 50% chance of not making it to the finals, not because you didn't win twice, BUT BECAUSE YOU WERE NOT SELECTED EVEN ONCE. HOW CAN A SCHOOL AGREE TO MAKE A TOURNAMENT WITH A SYSTEM AS BROKEN AS THIS?

"We're in the finals!" The referee shouted with excitement: "I know that many are discouraged by the withdrawals from the fight, but now the 10 finalists have been decided. Keep an eye on the screen that will show the table of the ten finalists."

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

how does this tournament even work.... it doesn't make any sens

"Well, with that Elijah Ferreira has 2 wins and goes to the finals." The referee said.

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska

codmuri
codmuri
2 years ago
Commented

"Which makes it a treasure for the Platinum continent. And that's why I'm telling you, so you can blabber about it to the rest of the school"

The director continued: "Student Amon is not only above level 20. He also has a special genetic block, in addition to the normal one. His case is very special, he can have two genetic unlocks at the same time, even though he is only on the first genetic unlock. Which makes it a treasure for the Platinum Continent."

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Amon, The Legendary Overlord

Fantasy · Lruska