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I like this story so far, but I'm don't like the recap of every item every few chapters.

I would like more kingdom building. It feels like once he is done with the business deal. He has a chance to change a lot and really become a true lord of the middle region

I really want Dao Shen to be around after this. That way they can keep having interactions like this. This made my day.

Don't tell me the worlds that are merging will have the return of the wood cutter finally getting to see jack again? Well the person that is.

Great chapter! I can't wait to see his response and what payment he gets. This was more than a simple delivery fee type payment. What will he get in place of his hand. Oh the next few chapters are going to be good.

i think working the back stories in is good but main focus should still be on progressing the story.

Is there a recap of characters somewhere? I dont remember where Allat came from.

They have to figure out what is shielding the planet from people leaving. This needs to be reversed to keep people out to give them more time to prepare.

That song is probably one of my favorite songs from Tyler Childers. Awesome choice!!!

That is a quick way of getting yourself out of a mess. Just become the king and then he won't have to be worried about being forced to do anything.

That was a pretty cool trailer.

He will start his army with them.

I'm enjoying the negotiations. I kinda thought it was going to be kill each ship and have undead crews. Im glad it didnt though because now they can go crazy on the upgrades.

Wow great chapter. I like how the world just changed. Hope you are feeling better.