I dont think so, just disjointed and rushed chapters.
So your saying one of the VERY FEW times the MC took action it was done off screen? And now that it's done, NO ONE is mentioning what happened when a literal god manifested in front of them? I'm getting a little tired about this novel being about everyone EXCEPT Leon. And I get it, you gave him a literal god ship that can practically grant wishes so now it's hard to create engaging stories with him, but just rehashing the movies with the MC showing up and doing things 'off-screen' is boring and kinda lame.
Yea this is going in a weird direction, probably gonna have to drop this now before I get a couple hundred chapters in and find out the MCs been trying to f@ck his bunny pokemon this whole time or something.
Little slip up when trying to upload the old chapters maybe?
Honestly hard to argue for brining the old chapters back when you still never know when it might all be deleted again. But If it wasn't a difficult task or super time consuming, then I'd say it would be the smart move to help people find and enjoy your novel without jumping sites.
But is that not way worse? Ignorance is one thing, but overwhelming arrogance is off putting. If the reason he let a known, 'nearly' unstoppable threat invade his home is so that they had job security, makes me hope the MC dies soon before he inadvertently sacrifices his entire world out of stupidity.
No wonder no one is reading this super uninspired, cliché filled, low effort cash grab. I made it to chapter 3 before it was so cookie-cutter that I literally couldn't bring myself to continue.
Ooof, come on man. Is their no way to maybe space these exposition/explanation heavy chapters out a bit?
Some people like seeing how the sausage is made, others think the knowledge ruins the meal.
'King gets shot' 'King stops MC from healing him' But? Looking at daughter "I wish I had a few more years with you....." Wut?
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