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I have exams next week as well Good luck sir

Sorry to hear you are getting writers block. maybe you need more conflicts for tayaw. you already had realistic push back in the ealier phases but woth how powerful he is now maybe you cna go into supernatural conflicts. Antognists are good for making the character shine. maybe someone smart tring to ruin him or a creature that goes after his view points.

If youre really throwing love into the mix have you Considered a antagonist of sorts. ‘Maybe something like a critic. it would just flow better if tayaw is dating soemone if equal or relatively equal status

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Been waiting for the movie reveal Cant wait for it to show up on scene I will give you all my power stones and all my free passes siR

Sad to hear about that But im haooy yonhear i can get even more

Thanks for writing. i hope you dont Drop it. I underetand how it is to lose motivation/inspiration. have you considered an end point? Its easier to persevere if you have a goal.

Thanks for finishing. I like how his reliance on his children as tools made him fall in love Since there is more limits in one piece then naruto. Which novel is jax from?

Thats good. It is a good place to stop. i appreciate your hard work and really enjoy your work so far. just dont want it to get too complicated which will make it hard for both you and us

I feel like its bordeline too much. you need to ground him. what are his liMits? Too much too fast would be hard to keep up with and makes the plot insignificant

Im confused, is there still no serious inquiry Of all these bloodline Tobi has?

Thanks for the hardwarok