well done.
there is no meat to the story ..just postering and vage threats and power plays nothing with substance ...correct me if im wrong.👍🏾
thnx 4 the chapter 👍🏾
its good ...The skyrim mix works well...don't worry about the gramercy
well done.
great chapter. keep it up👍🏾
great chapter [img=update]
its about pop of baby ...get it done take your i care not if it is months ...give me more 👌
ok story..your just saying the same thing that other writers of fan fics say switch it up a bit... focus on the mc more to much focus on secondary characters..thnx [img=recommend]
thnx ...well made..but please focus more on the hero...and the development changes ...crazy white man fighting becomes boring
Dragonlord (HP × ASOIAF)
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