The only time that “grammar correction” is right, is if the main character also thinks that PTSD happens instantly after an event, which is wrong. (And my comment is saying that is wrong).
“Not necessarily” means that the correct wording may or may not be that. However, if they were trying to “make a grammar correction”, them they are wrong. The entire chapter is in present tense. There are two possibilities for why the “correction” is made: 1. They are just wrong. 2. They are under the assumption that PTSD happens instantly, which is wrong.
“Casting down your own brother” ??? I don’t understand. What does this mean? I feel like I’ve forgotten a key part of this novel.
"And you are? Arceana is?" I asked with a tilted head as she stood. "Your Kingdom is built upon the blood of everyone else besides you and Arceana!" Moving towards her, I raised my voice as I looked at her unkempt appearance. "What did you ever do for this Kingdom?! Fight Rudnurth!" Clapping as I continued my approach, I stopped in front of her and clapped a few more times with her hair hanging partially in front of her face. "Congratulations on casting down your own brother!"
Star Eater
Fantasy · Von_5371
Not necessarily, symptoms of PTSD don’t always show up instantly. It is very common for them to show up a month later. (Tried and tested).
A previous paragraph says that he pulled that guy away from the group first.
Bai Zemin looked at him indifferently before saying in a deep voice, "Zhong De, Fu Xuefeng. Take two of these guys away and see if you can get some information."
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
Who and where? Missed that one.
[Skill(s): [Healing Light: 53 (C)] > [Healing Blight: 1 (B)], [Dhampir: - (S)], [Subordinate's Loyalty: - (A)], [Undying Body: 1 (A)], [Waves of Erosion: 1 (B)]
Vampire Overlord System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Is that it? I thought there was going to be something cruel from the two.
I’d have to be able to remember it first.
The final person, the old man who wore casual clothes and had a light stubble introduced himself last. "I'm Valentine Debrau, but you may know me as Kubrick."
Darius Supreme
Fantasy · Kotario
Correct. However, in English we write in two tenses, past or present. When I say entirely, I mean that there are no tense switches like there would be if you used flashbacks (Present -> Past).
Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
Fantasy · PancakesWitch