Please include other people’s POVs more often. I loved Hikigaya’s take on shishio being a riajuu.
ch 121 Club Activity? Can we use the club's budget?
Anime & Comics · akikan40
I hope you continue this story, I enjoyed it a lot. I hope to read what happens in this universe and how her love interests develop. Action and romance with feels on the side, really hits the spot for me. Gender-bent protagonist adds points too, especially if he originally liked women.
ch 26 Infiltration - Part 1
Video Games · FoozMajic
Well done. You really sent it home with the emotions you want the readers to feel. Rather than the talk with Halsey before the augmentations, this sent it straight through the feels. It always hits harder when you're personally involved than when you're a spectator.
ch 23 A Strong Foundation, Can Birth Legends - Part 6
Video Games · FoozMajic
I like both Jeannes from fate, but I also think Jeanne doesn’t get as much love as Jalter. As fate fans, we need to share the love.
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I'm surprised Leon still let's them talk him into doing more 'magic' lol.
ch 47 Invitation.
Urban · Fishball_22
Always wanted tiamat as a waifu.
ch 30 Chapter 29
Anime & Comics · OmegaDragon
Sorry to hear that. As far as I know the Meta for views and Powerstones has always been daily chapters on schedule. Once a lot of people develop the habit of looking for your daily updates, they usually drop stones too. Then that stacks when people see your novel on the rankings.
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Mikochi! No!
ch 0 7 First day at work
Anime & Comics · A_stray_kat
Do you mean footage instead of footing?
I like these longer chapters. There's a lot of content in it and I feel like there's a lot of progression. I love the idea of summoning characters from other works, but when the harems get too big, then nobody gets enough screen time besides the main wives. It's too easy to forget about some characters unless you can find a way to keep them somehow involved in the story. You can try something similar to NETA CHARA KARI PLAY NO TSUMORI and make an elite squad of wives or possibly go the kingdom building route.
ch 0 4 Menos Grande, alive for a second.
Anime & Comics · meatball_san
I think the better term to use instead of possessive would be sore about or irritated/snappy when his height is mentioned.
"He is called little monster at this vicinity." The village chief answered the knight's unintentional question and then added, "He is a little possessive of his height so be careful on stepping on his sore point, Sir Kay."
Anime & Comics · J_Titan
I feel like HoTD has been milked nonstop, so Its kinda bland now. You Should mix it up even more. Maybe some Gakkou Gurashi or another anime. The characters are fine, but the same scenarios get really tiring. You can also mess with the timeline by sending him before or after certain events.
You've already gotten this far, might as well commit. You're doing great so far. IMO, if you're worried about some kind of inconsistency or what other anime-verses go well together, you should think it over carefully. The easy way is to include other anime where they have no powers or those that specifically hide it. Otherwise, it'd be very difficult to keep the world consistent if you were to try to mash DXD with FATE and Dragon Ball Z. That being said, not all anime you add has to have a potential harem members, they can just be added to expand the universe. Last chapter though, being threatened and forced to become somebody's disciple shouldn't fly for the MC whose been literally doing as he pleases for his whole life so far.
Scatach is too waifu to not be added to the harem. That said, I don't have any particular attachment to Shuri or Akeno either. I can't think of anything for Kratos besides what someone commented earlier about reviving Kratos' family.
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Anime & Comics · Hancock_Sama
I'll vote for Heavens Feel
Imo, no big deal. If it comes down to it, you can just give them out as rewards instead of assigning prices to them too. As for confessions, at this point, they don't really matter. Confessions for someone who never confessed in his life before is bound to be looked back on as embarrassing. Even more so when it applies to both parties. Confessions likely end up that way when people just spill out their raw emotions and whatever comes to mind first anyway.
I love redemption stories the most, please keep it up!
ch 14 Chapter 13
Accelerator in the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Dawei