Wolves nodd their heads? I feel like this is one of those stories where you have to turn off your brain to truly enjoy the story. Puppy wolves are not even 3 months old going on a hunt, especially when it should be 6 months old. Wolves roar. Mc can still speak Chinese. They skipped the whole regurgitation of food for the pups.
When it approached the edge of the forest, Father Wolf stopped. It turned around and signaled to its children with its eyes. The two wolf brothers understood tacitly, and Su Ming and Su Hui also nodded.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
I don't think they are even 3 months old
Generally speaking, young wolves would follow the wolf pack out to learn hunting skills and wilderness survival skills when they were two to three months old.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
how? The mc's body is bigger and stronger there is no way the little pup could keep up.
About an hour later, it also successfully grasped the ability to jump. Moreover, it was becoming more and more proficient in running. It no longer needed Su Ming to slow down and could keep up with Su Ming.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
magic
Su Ming realized that his body had already become similar to a mid-sized dog, only a little shorter than his brother wolves at the entrance of the cave.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
I thought they had 3 days not two days of food
After a round of eating, the northern mountain goat in front of the wolves was finally eaten clean, leaving behind a pile of white bones.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
I never knew that, but I saw another comment about that. I am also sure that the author could have done simple Google search to fact check and learn what to write but didn't.
walking and running are two different activities
After walking for an entire three hours, he was still energetic and could not wait to carry out the next exercise.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
This must be like omniscient 3rd person point of view.
This was because the other party was not only a member of the wolf pack, but it was also the biological sister of this Mother Wolf.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
could have used the word scent
The eyes of the two female wolves lit up because they smelled a familiar smell. The main force of the wolf pack had returned.
Sci-fi · Oak Peter
I only read 7 chapters it's not horrible but I would not say it's great. To enjoy it you have kind of turn your brain off at times. Some misinformation about wolves, time frame is messed up, at one point it seems like he was only born recently then he is almost 3 months old. A bit of nationalism thrown in. A cliche system is added. Worst of all wolves apparently roar in this story.
Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths
Sci-fi · Oak Peter