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I am an avid reader of web novels and regular books. I also dabble in writing.

2018-05-14 入りました United States
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oscblade
2 years ago
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I only read 7 chapters it's not horrible but I would not say it's great. To enjoy it you have kind of turn your brain off at times. Some misinformation about wolves, time frame is messed up, at one point it seems like he was only born recently then he is almost 3 months old. A bit of nationalism thrown in. A cliche system is added. Worst of all wolves apparently roar in this story.

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2 years ago
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Wolves nodd their heads? I feel like this is one of those stories where you have to turn off your brain to truly enjoy the story. Puppy wolves are not even 3 months old going on a hunt, especially when it should be 6 months old. Wolves roar. Mc can still speak Chinese. They skipped the whole regurgitation of food for the pups.

When it approached the edge of the forest, Father Wolf stopped. It turned around and signaled to its children with its eyes. The two wolf brothers understood tacitly, and Su Ming and Su Hui also nodded.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
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I don't think they are even 3 months old

Generally speaking, young wolves would follow the wolf pack out to learn hunting skills and wilderness survival skills when they were two to three months old.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
Commented

how? The mc's body is bigger and stronger there is no way the little pup could keep up.

About an hour later, it also successfully grasped the ability to jump. Moreover, it was becoming more and more proficient in running. It no longer needed Su Ming to slow down and could keep up with Su Ming.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
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magic

Su Ming realized that his body had already become similar to a mid-sized dog, only a little shorter than his brother wolves at the entrance of the cave.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
Commented

I thought they had 3 days not two days of food

After a round of eating, the northern mountain goat in front of the wolves was finally eaten clean, leaving behind a pile of white bones.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
Replied to rurik_Aunimoto

I never knew that, but I saw another comment about that. I am also sure that the author could have done simple Google search to fact check and learn what to write but didn't.

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2 years ago
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walking and running are two different activities

After walking for an entire three hours, he was still energetic and could not wait to carry out the next exercise.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
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This must be like omniscient 3rd person point of view.

This was because the other party was not only a member of the wolf pack, but it was also the biological sister of this Mother Wolf.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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2 years ago
Commented

could have used the word scent

The eyes of the two female wolves lit up because they smelled a familiar smell. The main force of the wolf pack had returned.

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Rebirth Into A Wolf: I Can See My Evolution Paths

Sci-fi · Oak Peter

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