Out patrolling with a 3-year-old son, and Damian isn't near Arche... hm...
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Fantasy · SenorSleep
"until *I* was old enough" I didn't realize you jumped into the story too, o' Sir Author.
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Fantasy · SenorSleep
She's making an agreement with a child who is a few months old who is crawling around in the middle of the night? No freak out. No wondering how the baby got there. How the baby escaped. Instead, casually asking and waiting for a response from an infant who is a few months old?
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Fantasy · SenorSleep
Doors are latched closed. He's crawling. Yet he can crawl out the doors?
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Fantasy · SenorSleep
Well, because when I first wrote this review, there were like, just a few chapters?
I appreciate your enthusiasm! Try pinging the higher ups on discord or on the forums. You'll get better chance for response there. Unfortunately, I don't think the higher ups check these reviews at all.
Translation was put to a stop. Something something something politics/policies/stats/target goals.
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A one-shot short story of a man and his wife. From the author: Hey guys! Do let me know where I can improve on! This is my first actual story that I've written. Love it? Hate it? Please tell what you love/hate about each section! It's easier to see things when you're not involved! Please, be constructive about it! Thanks!1 Chs 11 お気に入り
We switched from third-person perspective to first-person perspective here now
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Fantasy · SenorSleep