DrakeDaDragon

The pacing of this story is slow. Like unbelievably slow. A simple interaction that should be done in 1 chapter, 2 at the most, gets spread to 5 or 10 chapters. Run on sentences take up the majority of this book, and the same stuff keeps getting repeated over and over. Author, you need to cut down on the characters constantly repeating what each other says in disbelief cuz that gets tiring real quick. Also the ideas you're trying to convey can be condensed a lot. So much unnecessary writing that the plot has barely gotten anywhere after 300 chapters.

I don't understand at all what's happening. The plot is very disjointed and things just seem to jump from scene to scene with no explanation of how they got to that point. Characters are also not very fleshed out.

This novel is so basic. like the thousand other outcast young from a rich family who becomes a mercenary and has medical skills. no originality. Even the types of women are the same. Plus there's clearly some kind of chinese national superiority complex and racism against black people? The only plus for this story is that it's well translated with no grammar or spelling errors that I could easily notice.

This novel has a lot of potential, but the amount of grammar and spelling errors bug me like crazy. Also, the lack of explanations and a bunch of mistakes makes me so confused. Honestly, the story doesn't really flow well.

This novel is insanely good. It's so dark, and there's a lot of messed up stuff, but I can't stop reading. I do wish the r-18 scenes came more frequently, and there was more build-up to them, but other than that, this novel is amazing.

I previously wrote a review saying that this novel was too similar to another, but after reading further, the differences grew by a lot so I took down the old review. The story starts off a little rough, but the plot gets a lot better after the first 100 chapters. One thing I wish was done better however, is development of side characters. There are too many women, way too quickly, and not much about them is known. R-18 scenes are also very 1 and done with a majority, which is disappointing.Slower introduction of new women, more scenes involving each one, and maybe some more details that would provide individuality to each woman would really improve the story.