Atkinsopn

Atkinsopn

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2017-11-14 入りました Global
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Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
2 days ago
Commented

Chinese mc has butt licking in his blood, it’s easier to be a doctrine yes man then actually learn a skill?

"Perhaps it's because things haven't settled down yet," Tatsuma muttered to himself. Such textbooks fell short of meeting the comprehensive developmental needs of morality, philosophy, artistic expression, and history. They appeared to be tailored solely to cultivate ninja combat skills.

Naruto: My Unique System

Naruto: My Unique System

Anime & Comics · Cloe23

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
23 days ago
Commented

this translation is so well done i forgot that the main character had a chinese writer. - serious question is it stereotypical or a meme that chinese writers will have the base view where the mc looks at a new pet animal with the inner feelings of someone looking at an interesting worthless bug you wouldn't mind squishing.? 0 thoughts about the animal and its well being. idk seems like a psychopathic opinion, I've read these few paragraphs like 5 different times in a different chinese books and fanfics. is it a trope to have the mc get a pet and give it scrap bones as its main diet the moment the chinese mc get it. ?

Seeing the bald falcon's reaction behind him, Nicolas was stunned for a moment, then stared at it in astonishment. "It can't be; with such a big size at birth, do you not eat bones? Do birds drink milk?"

One Piece: I wield thunder and lightning

One Piece: I wield thunder and lightning

Anime & Comics · DaoistAutumn_rain

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Commented

Basically dropped this book, I think only a girl would like reading a book like this. I skipped here from the first time the writer pulled this stunt, after it became clear they weren’t going to finish the the suspense and give the mc the potion. Basically sidelined the mc. Kinda glad I dropped when I did I’m just not the target audience.

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Replied to DonGuirit

It’s poorly articulated but he may be talking about lifespan ?

Rex ' is that so, that's good to know, seems that I won't worry about aging for a long time'

SOARING TO NEW HEIGHTS: Welcome to my pokemon world

SOARING TO NEW HEIGHTS: Welcome to my pokemon world

Anime & Comics · Plug_O_Stien

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Replied to TheSilverPrince

Did you get ripped to pieces in the comment section of Patreon aswell ? -regarding the punishment system mechanic existing to retroactively change the story direction and flow? I’m curious if everyone jumped ship when you did it a second time.

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Commented

The blindness subplot was glossed over so heavily because the punishment system exists purely for retroactively changing the story on the flip of a penny, terrible writing, surprised after getting his head ripped off the first time the writer did it again, there is no illusion that it was a mistake we all move pass, genuinely terrible writing. I’m glad I have the mentality of skipping any recommendations to other works force-fed as new chapters in these fanfics. Can’t imagine how terrible they would be when he is struggling so hard with a handicap using pre-existing media

All in all, Axel was finally able to see from his eyes and was ready to go on another journey. He was ready to challenge another Gym.

Pokemon - A real story

Pokemon - A real story

Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Replied to ForTheEmperor

The punishments are at their core the writer being terrible at writing and retroactively changing the story in the worst way possible.

Punishment 2: Both of the host eyes have been disabled for 1 month temporarily

Pokemon - A real story

Pokemon - A real story

Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Replied to Atkinsopn

Reread the chapter writer probably scrapped the plot line and the punishment mechanism that is already used at his whim is just for deleting that plot and retroactively changing his story after the fact

Doing this, the host would be awarded rewards and punishments

Pokemon - A real story

Pokemon - A real story

Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
1 months ago
Replied to SpideyNova

The Writer retroactively changes how he wants the story to flow not realizing that’s it’s easily to see through and it comes off as terrible writing we are already eating shit, why make it worse.

Atkinsopn
Atkinsopn
2 months ago
Commented

this whole daniel antagonist got old forever ago....