Shoopuff1

2 months ago

Commented

What's his level? there is almost no focus on his System in the passed few chapters. You get no sense of his progress.

ch 16 Meeting New Friends

Harem Master: Seduction System

Fantasy · Evil_Villain

Shoopuff1

5 months ago

Commented

Correction () - "regarded them as a (piggybank) to squeeze.

However, he also needed to find a way to get rid of the good-for-nothing leeches who were given everything but, instead of being content and thankful, regarded them as a piggyback to squeeze.

SSS rank Mother-In-Law to an Invincible Family

Fantasy · Anime_timez24

Shoopuff1

1 years ago

Commented

people, beasts and beings (missing a comma)

この段落は削除されました。

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

Shoopuff1

1 years ago

Commented

young lady or young miss

After all, he did effortlessly saved their young master. And he clearly holds the power to kill her as well, yet he chose to save her.

Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System

Eastern · CosmicPrime

Shoopuff1

1 years ago

Commented

"A good chunck of their"

A good chuck of their attacks was considerably weakened, all because of the strange arts this little girl cultivates.

Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System

Eastern · CosmicPrime

Shoopuff1

1 years ago

Commented

"even seen in his previous life." "previous art." is just confusing.

These high-grade Heavenly Arts also produced powerful abilities he hadn't even seen in his previous art. One such Art included the ability to create Law essence claws that can twist apart space and slow down time!

Absolute Yin-Yang Desire System

Eastern · CosmicPrime

Shoopuff1

1 years ago

Commented

"Five loud thuds" is beter English "thumbs" make no sense.[img=recommend]

Five loud thumbs reverberated as the beasts' beheaded heads crashed into the snow. At the same time, the snowy white tigers' corpses slumped into the snow.