Tion

This is a great story! I think it must be the second time I review a story on this site at all, even after using web novel for more than a year already, but I really felt this work deserved at least some encouraging words... :) Really though, you started this story very well, I love how you are balancing the MC progress and power level without rushing things, I had a few doubt about how sudden the romance started, but even that was then well balanced and not rushed... Since the story is still only starting out ( because 26 chapters are more than enough to feel the potential here is massive, but it's still the start of the story in my opinion) I'm just going to end my review for now saying that you are doing amazing, so really, keep going like that, don't rush or feel pressured if someone criticize/ask for determinate developments; the story is yours, it's literally impossible to satisfy everyone, and I'm sure for every one that complain about something a lot of the readers love what you are doing!! :) P.S. sorry for the loong review, as I said in the beginning of this, I usually don't do them, so I kinda got into it and could've kept it shorter ;)