dcsteimle

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2017-11-10 入りました Global
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dcsteimle
dcsteimle
27 days ago
Posted

The story isn't terrible, but the author needs to remember his characters and what skills he has, who is where in the story and you can't just have one minute a character isn't supposed to be in a situation but then the next paragraph says that he is there. And what the fuck happened to his pet land dragon that had an entire story arc on and then it just disappears.

dcsteimle
dcsteimle
2 years ago
Commented

The story is interesting but I think someone needs to edit it

dcsteimle
dcsteimle
2 years ago
Commented

What's going on with webnovel.com? Do they really think it's ok to put so much junk editing and translation into their site? Not a single chapter from any story I have read tonight is comprehensible.

dcsteimle
dcsteimle
2 years ago
Posted

I think I am going to drop this story from my reading list, I used to really like the story but the writing quality and translation quality has dropped sharply. I can't follow what is going on in the chapters any more.

dcsteimle
dcsteimle
2 years ago
Commented

I’m not sure if this chapter was machine translated but I couldn’t follow it

dcsteimle
dcsteimle
3 years ago
Commented

I think the story is funny but the author needs to be consistent with the characters in the story. Jeff Bezos own amazon and not george soros

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