Anyone thinking this chapter is deep is a brainlet. I know feeling disgust at this detailed gory description is hypocritical in nature, I'm a human. We're hard-wired to protect women because their value in the survival of our species is almost infinitely higher than for men. The entire message is maybe a revelation for some who never had a deep thought in their life, but for others it feels extremely forced and unneccesary. And for people saying MC only does things for his own sake and isn't inherently evil, there was no reason at all to wake the girl up and terrify her before killing her. It seems more like he gained some twisted pleasure from her squirming in her restraints, I at least can't think of any other reason for not just killing her while unconscious. I guess I'll keep reading untill the first book is done and make a decision then, but it's not looking good. I care about characters and relationships the most in stories, this novel sucks in that aspect.
Really great story, enjoyable and well-written characters and intriguing magic-system. I feel like the story, character interactions and romantic relationships got worse during the second half of what is written so far, but I'm hoping and believeing it (especially the romance) will get better after the recent arc-shift. Slight spoiler about romantic relationships; I feel like the author is into ntr. And I'm very much not. The writing quality and occasional mistake in names and earlier happenings draws it down a little bit, and that's the weakest point of the novel for me. Some proofreading or an editor going through everything before the chapters are posted would help a lot.
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original Aspect of Survival
Humanity will need every warrior it can find to have any chance of surviving. Reality was shattered into pixels and lies as John discovered his entire life had been a meticulously crafted simulation. Awakened in a cold, unfamiliar world, he finds himself thrust into a desperate war against inhuman monsters, on the losing side. Luckily, John loves few things more than a good fight! What to expect: - Long-term progression-focused story. - Romance, no harem. - Growing power system. - Determined, combat-loving MC - Unique enchantments and powers.60 Chs 10 お気に入り
- original
Enchantress of the Vermilion Flame
In the cozy, cobblestoned town of Thundrel, Lilly Baker feels unfulfilled living the life of a baker, and wants to do something more with her life. After dreaming about the amulet she's had since she was a child, she decides to research it, and discovers that it holds secrets beyond what she could have imagined. The life she wanted to live seemed a lot more achievable now, and she is determined to use this chance for what it's worth. Author note: This is my first story, so I hope you'll be careful with critique. I put it on Royal Road first, but I guess there's no reason to keep it only there. I hope you enjoy! I have no idea if male oriented is right for this story, it feels like it could fit both genders. I stopped releasing here on webnovel, but it's still going on royal road if you want a better reading experience. I also have pictures there, which I couldn't figure out how to include here.64 Chs 7 お気に入り
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Aspect of Survival
Fantasy · NoMine