Instead of telling how the game is interesting, which is kinda getting boring, just express the new feelings, he gets with each beta and how immersive is the world, etc.
Honestly, the mountain which supports the royal city should be reinforced to block such blows as any 'nobody'* could one day just destroy it. Some formation and whatnot protecting it or something.
In a tumultuous world where tension was on the rise between the different factions, John was determined to push through, even with his low talent. However, the impression, based on false assumptions, didn't let him prepare for what would come his way.
-->Synopsis subject to change as I write the story on the go... Don't bash the newbie writer, and I hope you appreciate the read.
-->All feedbacks are welcome.
Have a nice day.
Instead of telling how the game is interesting, which is kinda getting boring, just express the new feelings, he gets with each beta and how immersive is the world, etc.
Closed Beta That Only I Played
Fantasy · basso77