Why the flowery language? why not use your own voice and correct grammar mistakes with chatgpt or grammarly? there are a lot of things being said that could have been summarized with fewer words. I started reading this because although the first few chapters were simplistic in writing style, I still felt the author's intent in the writing. Now, it just feels like I'm reading something written by an AI.
Also thanks for another great chapter!
What happened to Jean? She's feeling very underutilized now. What about Magneto and his place in the pantheon? You were doing so many interesting things before that I wish you weren't in a rush to explore new things yet.
one of paragon angels
Happy Birthday!!!
It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!
battle iq: AOT's Armin vs bertoltd's collusus battle.battle instincts:AOT's Ackerman's bloodline.
Machia isn't any genius, he doesn't have a high Battle I.Q., but he has good battle instincts. The two are different... This means that he is not prone to outsmarting his opponent, but he can notice that he is strong and use his advantage.
Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
Are you imagining yourself being the Mc?
We had our house refurnished to make the kitchen on the upper left side of this room, "Oh, the last night's porn is still up. Want to watch it."
HE of Infinite Lives (Multi-Verse Story)
Anime & Comics · NetoraseTales
Sigh... another bashing fic. I get that the ministry is curropt, but taking every chance to bash them is distracting.
"I've just had the most wonderful idea, folks," I said through my scowl. "Since Crouch and Bagman want to play games with our champions, I feel like we should turn the tables on them. Let's see how they like being ogled by a crowd in freezing weather."
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]
Book&Literature · Daddy
Exactly. It felt like the author just wanted to justify every Mc decision. Has he forgotten that Shield is Hydra at this point in the story? Because if he did, then he would know that these personas don't serve any goal.
Ice-Ice Fruit in Marvel
Anime & Comics · Senatus