EbonyFrost

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Old head that’s been reading web novels since the early days

2017-04-25 入りました United States
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EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
2 years ago
Replied to InquisitorCrusader

It’s more likely to be the other way around

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Tyranny of Steel

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
2 years ago
Commented

The highlight of my week is seeing new chapters posted. That being said, I understand your frustrations and misgivings. While I don’t want to see another amazing fan fiction end prematurely or dropped, it’s understandable if you feel you can spend your time and energy on more fruitful endeavors. Regardless, I’ll always be a fan of your work and look forward to supporting anything you do creatively. Thanks for the amazing story and keep up the great work!

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RWBY: Fireborn (Complete)

RWBY: Fireborn (Complete)

Anime & Comics · Hawkin

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Commented

Thank you for the amazing chapter!

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Commented

Timelibe seems a bit Off but loving the writing nonetheless

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Commented

Its hilarious how realistic this is. When I met my fiancée, all my degrees and certifications went out the window and I was braindead

Edward was confused at the moment. Really, the men in love lose their brain cells. Edward thought that he did not hear about any young knight strong enough to stand against him.

Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

TV · GNaNA

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Replied to JulioBueno

That’s just a cruel and unnecessary reminder of darker times 🥲

In the beautiful city of Madrid, Spain, at the corner of Alcala street, a small winery shop stood there. A young man in his twenties, called Edward, owned this tiny shop.

Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer

TV · GNaNA

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Commented

I’d recommend downloading the grammarly keyboard app. It’ll correct a lot of these errors for you that take away from the quality of your writing.

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Replied to badah

Using the term blunt would also be significantly better than "non-sharp edge."

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Tales of The Mighty Dragonair

Tales of The Mighty Dragonair

Fantasy · ranmaro

EbonyFrost
EbonyFrost
3 years ago
Commented

I hope the writing gets a little better as the story progresses. These terms are just atrocious and ruin the flow. Sit down and figure out your power systems and then create a glossary with names for each of them that don't sound like terrible google translate.

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Tales of The Mighty Dragonair

Tales of The Mighty Dragonair

Fantasy · ranmaro