Ye defaq...? Why are people like this? https://www.webnovel.com/book/meddling-giant_25295498805484505
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I'm pretty sure you stole this fanfic? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13801875/30/Meddling-Giant
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Why choose vampirism as his preferred immortality? The Enchiridion should have information about the Wishmaster(Prismo), who can grant wishes... Unless you plan to use the wish to make both Mc and Marcy immune to the sun?
I'm kinda with OP, it's a slog to read through these long monotonous descriptions... I like setting the tone and atmosphere as much as the next guy, but not when it slows the pace of the story to a crawl. You're leaving readers with three options, continue reading the descriptions to stay in the story, skip past them to things of substance, or push them to abandon it all together. For me good writing is primarily in how succinctly you can convey your meaning. Plus, for fanfics, in a universe most of your readers have already experienced, describing every nitty gritty detail is unnecessary.
I think itd serve the story better to reveal the choices as they come.theyll be obvious when u see them
The good news is that the world isn't on the precipice of destruction, the PRT or 'Protectorate' seems to have things well in hand, and some super-superhero called Scion disabled every country's nuclear armaments, preventing any thought of nuclear annihilation from a trigger happy nation or mind controlled official.
Book&Literature · Niggross
I hold votes on my patreon for next fix, starwars has been on there 3 times now, to no avail.
Cloudy with a chance of reincarnation
Video Games · Niggross
Their prostitute beating stunt is actually cannon xd
Fic's based on a worm cyoa, where getting immorality accidentally through a power is almost comically common.
So... I had a superpower, an albeit weak one. What now?
Book&Literature · Niggross
CYOA was on the hardest difficulty with lowest points, to get any decent powers he had to cripple himself... Of course, our mc never expected for his picks to become reality.
The good news is that the world isn't on the precipice of destruction, the PRT or 'Protectorate' seems to have things well in hand, and some super-superhero called Scion disabled every country's nuclear armaments, preventing any thought of nuclear annihilation from a trigger happy nation or mind controlled official.
Book&Literature · Niggross
Bro, you can't just delete my review telling folks how you stole this story from CloudNineStories : Meddling Giant For shame!
Harry Potter : Reborn as Hagrid
Book&Literature · Demonun