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is the chapter getting shorter? 🤔

looks like it's gonna be another one that never come to the end cause the author has to many novel to write, what a shame

let's wait for another months on tge next update

so another one chapter full of bs

it really progressing at snail pace, are u run out of juice author?

oh some stupid father, punch the kid cause he see old photograph, but cannot hit him after he killed his family.. better he died first rather than the daughter and his wife.

cultivation? adventure? action? why don't u remove that tag? since the start until now what i read is a slice of life thingy.

yo dude, u are nerfing the mc to much, and f*ck*ng make a mess with the cultivation realm, well mc is on par with king realm when he is 2 stages below, and now he is in immortal realm but cannot beat 1 stage above him?

to many info dump, less action, it's better to reduce unimportant info of 16 heaven or every clan that the mc meet, isn't this novel is about xianxia? so better cut the history session and do more action for the mc.

90% monologe, 8% bs about konoha, 2% progress on the story, 2 chapter wasted just for self thinking,

bs talk no jutsu, giving info on his own skill, that's the most stupid thing in this novel

damn to short, and it takes ages to update for just 1 chapter, mass release please

been waiting for ages, thanks for the chap

writer block? or don't care bout ur novel anymore?

dude mass release please, it make me dizzy reading the original author translation🤯

thanks for the chapter,

thanks for the chapter, more please....

the pace is to slow, so far u're using repetitive sentences on one chapter to describe situation/mc emotional condition/etc... before the S-day the mc just playing "S&M" to whoever bitch he see, when he should be prepraring himself to get stronger faster, i think he's not wise enough for 1000y old man who get back stabed by people close to him on the second maybe last chance that he got. sorry dude i just said whatever in mind...