At least they are consistent with the two main characters' names.
Suddenly, he felt a pain in his left arm. James turned to look at Gina Lopez, whose displeased eyes were fixed on James's right arm. James could only respond with a bitter smile to indicate that it wasn't his initiative; it was Grace Lopez who had taken the lead, and what could he do?
The Supreme Soldier in the City
Urban · Tomorrows
You would think these types of issues would be worked this far into a novel.
Who is Helen? Is this supposed to be Jenny?
"Helen, what do you think?"
Sorcerer: I want to be an Academic Prodigy
Eastern · Toward a Piece of Writing
What, you just copy a scene from the movie Dumb and Dumber as filler? I can't believe I paid for that!
Dude, get a proofreader! Names are all over the place in this chapter.
Is it Janney or Jenny/Jennie? The only consistant name is Ivan.
New chapter, new name for sister!
The three of them arrived on the fourth floor, and Emily Lopez checked out each shop one by one. This young lady chose trendy, youthful clothes, trying them on one after another, which exhausted Gina Lopez, while James Brown watched with great enthusiasm. For him, watching a beauty change outfits for his enjoyment was a treat, something he would never tire of.
The Supreme Soldier in the City
Urban · Tomorrows