Yeah... Fits the cringe 12 year old BS he keeps pulling that when something doesn't go his way he instantly starts acting like some pathetic B.
"We have already chosen a master for you and gotten their approval on the matter" That's the final nail in the coffin, chances are I'll be fucking dead soon, killed off by either the droids or the bugs. Fuck this shit man, I'll need to find a way to desert soon maybe I'll should be able to kick it as a bounty hunter I just need to lay low for a while so the order doesn't find me.
Star Wars: Blurred Lines
Movies · DodgyWriter
His entire personality is a weakness. The cringe B needs to seriously get a reality check...
As we strode down the path I couldn't help but wonder what trial I would end up getting from the cave. It's not as if I've got any blaring weaknesses, unless you count an extreme dislike for cold weather but I doubt that would be a problem since being here would already count as a trial to overcome.
Star Wars: Blurred Lines
Movies · DodgyWriter
Ah yes. In the midst of battle you will just sit down and start a 10 minute chant while keeping eye contact with your opponent who's throwing spells at you and rising to the air at 67m/s after you broke the stonewall they transfigured to mount the broom safely...
Alex's flying skills were average at best. He had decent balance and could stay steady on a broom, but he never cared enough to excel. Every time he flew, his mind wandered to combat scenarios—he imagined how vulnerable one would be in an aerial battle, moving too slowly and becoming an easy target. To him, broomstick flying wasn't worth the effort.
Harry Potter : Reincarnated as The Greatest Wizard
Book&Literature · SwordmanCarryNuke
What math are we using to arrive here? The number of students in Hogwarts was around a 1000 during Harry's school years and they regularly live over 200 even 300 years. Hogsmeade alone most likely had 3000 poeple...
"Yeah, the total magical population in Britain is around 3,000 people," Dudley said confidently. As someone who had read an interview with J.K. Rowling, he knew well that the total population of wizards in Britain was only 3,000.
HP: I Become Dudley With The Power Of Hogwarts Legacy
Movies · ZoroTraineeWriter
Your MC is beginning to sound more and more like someone who wanted to commit self delete without it being perceived as such... Or do you actually think this is how people who do extreme sports act normally?
As he wanted to imitate a flying superhero on a whim, he didn't have much time to plan his stunt.
Harry Potter: A Real Tale(AU, SI)
Book&Literature · soul_words
....so MC just forgot the dark wizard was in the forest as well right after realizing something is causing everyone to lose control of their emotions and he didn't even bother to check where that dark wizard was after? Seriously?
A pair of red eyes watched Leon from deeper in the cavern.
Harry Potter: A Real Tale(AU, SI)
Book&Literature · soul_words
Why is he turning into a Stephen Strange/Tony Stark hybrid? Its cringe as F... The moment he went to learn magic its like a switch flicked and his personality just changed completely with literally nothing to actually explain why it changed...
......can you add dark or villain or evil to the tags? Since he clearly could care less about his so called "friends"? They don't have a F relic of the Creator on them to escape if something goes wrong after all....
"It's our time to leave.", Ethan said causing Loki to tense since although he didn't want to spend another minute here, he also for some reason wanted to see this situation through since he'd already become so involved in it.
HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.
Book&Literature · Hooin_Kyoma
Oh great. Shame he didn't feel like sharing what he suspected of the Dog. I'm sure nothing will go wrong entering the dreams of people who might be corrupted by a F God...
"We're going to use the mediumship ritual to talk to the villagers who have become unconscious.", Ethan said with a frown. "We might need to talk to everyone present but I don't think I can hold out to talk to all of them so you might have to take over."
HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.
Book&Literature · Hooin_Kyoma
Why the F would he do this on Coruscant the future seat of the Empire? He has zero plans for order 66 and has done no preparations for when he becomes a fugitive. Instead hes spending all his money to buy S in the worst place possible...
First off I bought a club in the entertainment district, which is where I'm currently heading to. It's a swanky looking place and I got it for a killer price after threatening the arsehole that used to own it. Even came with most of the stuff I wanted already built in, all I'm needing is booze and workers in then we'll be all good to start up business. Oh and find Ros Lai she's still not showed up, but it's only a matter of time before she shows up. Until then Wires and his team of droids are in charge of guarding the place from unwanted visitors.
Star Wars: Blurred Lines
Movies · DodgyWriter