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Zero Soul

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作者: Sirius459

4.75 (26 レビュー結果)

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Vampires, Creatures that only exist in books and movies but, that all changed since the great tragedy 50 years ago. 90 percent of the human population has partially turned into vampires and those who fail to adapt are turned into ghouls which are predatory creatures that are thirsty for fresh blood. Now humans build great walls to protect them from threats that were originally only fictitious now become real threats.

Five years ago the walls of mankind were breached by the vampires and caused many victims to fall, Luke who witnessed his family being massacred and saw his younger sister kidnapped by the vampires. Luke joins an army of vampire hunters and is determined to go on an expedition beyond the walls into vampire territory to save his sister and eradicate the vampires from this world.

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    Sigheti

    A popular premise, but well-executed. There’s a few flaws I wanted to point out, in the hope to help you progress. Your grammar is passable, although I would personally refrain from using the passive voice as much as you do. It makes sentences clunky, vague and awkward. So if you can change the subject of the sentence in order to rewrite it in active voice without this changing your meaning, I advise you to do so. There is an absence of rhythm in your writing. I’m aware it isn’t easy to write with rhythm, and personally, I struggle with it as well, but try to bring some more rhythm to your paragraphs. The dialogue is clear, but sometimes it comes across a a bit forced. Overall, I believe your work holds a lot of potential. I wish you luck!

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    Dadevilslastcry

    This story is what I am looking for, while I'm reading this story, I felt like it reminds me of Owari no Seraph but I know it's far from it.

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    Jeri_
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    I like that MC have a proper goal, so the story will be followed well. 👏🏻 The plot is intriguing and different, kind of systemic vampires story. 👋 Some paragraps were too long, but you can easily edit that any time. 🦋🙆🏼‍♀️ This novel is really tempting for fantasy/vampire fans.😌 Names were chosen well, mc looks enjoyable and trustworthy. This book is reliable for good plot, well done. 👏🏻

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    Dark_Maniac24

    Reading this book makes me remember my favorite anime, Attack on Titian. Nice one author, you developed your well, I really hope to see more and it would nice if it's better than AOT. I'm rooting for you.

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    Novelistilia

    Wow, the story is captivating from the start! It feels like you are really inside his world. Kudos to the author. You nailed it! Can't wait for Luke to achieve his goals. 🤩🔥

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    Denzel_Silver

    I have always been a fan of Vampires. And the way you blended it with the setting of one of my favorite anime, AOT, this book, to me, is simply splendid. Keep up the good work!

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    Amzy_Bella

    wow, five stars for you author. you did an amazing work here. this novel is not to be missed by any. I don't know but I like Vampire novels and this one also got me .

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    Anya_231

    The story start with dark plot and i really enjoyed how the author create the post apocalypse and how the author make the plot of this story not boring. every chapter i read i really can't hold myself

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    Surbhi_mithil

    Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. recommended:),

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    Sage_Tranquil

    What an interesting prologue ! Hmm, some readers who like to read apocalyptic and gore theme, will definitely like this story too. I bet your story will be able to attract many apocalyptic fans. Good work, author !

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    RiyaSarkar24

    This book is purely for Gore book lovers. I personally like like reading apocalypse themed books. Humans hunting vampires is definitely an interesting plot and author have justified by his writing skills.

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    moved_44

    This is very nice book and I must say the Author really did a great job! The first chapters captured my attention and the book cover is eye-catching.

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    qurat_ul_ain4

    Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark.. I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense. Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!

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    Moonwriting

    It's a beautiful story to start a read. well written and keep you captured. It engages your mind and touches your soul. The storyline unique and well define of characters. Good job author

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    Muche_Godwin

    I really like this novel. The story progression is awesome. And the characters are really unique. Keep up the good work author. I hope to see more chapters uploaded

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    _Rockbison_

    Nice plot l must say .... Author hasn't upload more but still l can say that l is a very interesting story that everyone should try reading... All the best author and plzzz do upload a lot and so that l can read more 🤭🤭

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    RosemilOduor

    The author has a good storyline and I'm glad to be have read this piece. It's off with a good start and I can't wait to read more chapters. Are you looking for fantasy novels? Be sure to check this out, you won't be disappointed.

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    AbdulfatahFatima

    Oh am really enjoying this book of yours the characters are great,t the plot and the writing style is good keep it up author,I have add to my library for update

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    Lercher

    Vampire, yeah I really enjoyed every story who have a vampire in it. But this story is different, i don't know why but this story feel really special

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    Elruna

    I really enjoyed how the author make this story, how the author shape the world of this story and how the author create nice pace on the plot.

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