概要
imagine dying not to a truck or a meat bun but in a normal way when you learn too much ya this isn't a revenge story there no point in taking Revenge against somebody who just trying to survive in this capitalistic world we call home so I died you can probably figure out where the rest of this story goes right.
(Copyrights nothing is mine aside from the protagonist and a select few races and abilities. Everything else goes to the original authors this includes Akame ga kill world where it begins and any future world he goes to.)
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The plot is interesting but the way it's written is terrible. ................................................................. ................................................................. ..........................................
Okay this is ridiculous. Maybe it could've been a better novel if the writing quality was better but nah, it just had to be that bad. The only reason I'm not giving it a one star review is because the author did put in some effort in writing this and I'd feel bad to give out a one star review. However, be warned. This novel is in no way unworthy of a one star rating. The most basic yet important thing for a novel, a story or even just a paragraph of text is to be able to be read and understood. If it can't be understood or is written badly, the rest of the factors can be thrown into the trash can. You need to be able to understand the novel for the other factors to come to play.
I read 3 chapters and the flow of the story was all over the place, it is hard to know who is talking or what is happening, it is as if you skip something after a few words, I can see that it has potential but even the rewritten chaps are bad, I really like the concept but it is a pity I will have to drop it, I think this is the second time I am dropping it hhhhh
I am not sure what is even going on sir. Please write something readable. ............................................................................
My brain rota in record speed by just trying to comprehend what im reading. Seriously I’ve seen a toddler write a more eligible story.
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Was it only me or the synopsis sounds very much like the one with the Tensura Novel made by Daniel? Anyways... LOL HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I have tried to read past chp 3 and every time I fail and this is the 6th time this as happened the concept of the story is good but the execution is downright horrible the 1chp makes you think you have skip 20chps and you need to go back to read the 1chp then you remember that what you are reading is the 1chp. If you start to rewrite the story can be salvaged before it goes up in flames