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章 28: Chapter 28: Fumiko’s Special Learning Style Pt. 2

"Okay, now that you're no longer staring off into space we can get to training, but first you need to change your form." I looked down at the cum-bloated gremlin as she waddled toward me with a mischievous look in her eyes.

"Why, is Papa afraid tha—itai! Why did you hit me!?" Steam floated from the red bump growing from the top of her head, my own knuckles released steam as well.

"Because we need to focus not fuck, and your ability to do both at the same thing is nonexistent so we'll be prioritizing the thing we need the most right now. To properly train you will need to use your actual body to have the things you learn while image training translate over." I backed away as the reluctant girl burst into a ball of light similar to a magical girl transformation before reappearing as her grown up self.

"Ugh, fiiiiiiiine but you have to promise we'll do it again in my mind, the feeling of you spreading my pussy so wide was magical!" It seems she got the same level of enjoyment I had fucking her loli form, so of course I nodded in agreement.

"Okay, the first thing you need to do is generate your bubble aura. Unlike a base elemental aura [Eukrasia] elements will require your utmost control to maintain a state of [Geist Release] due to the fact that you will need to mix the combined elements together outside of your [Humor Nodes]. I would suggest using the circuits around your heart, visualize those veins and as their physical counterpart transports blood your circuits transport your bubble aura. This will be more difficult than when you use your [Phantom Tool] as that is a specifically designed bubble wand meant to automatically transmute your geist into bubble aura." As I spoke I helped Fumiko correct her fighting stance by adjusting her legs and the way she held her arms.

The importance of hand-to-hand combat in the series was sorely lacking as most fights towards the end of the series forwent any martial arts and went straight to technique battles. The issue with following that strategy is that anyone with a little talent in martial arts and geist reserves equal to yours can simply curb-stomp you before you get to use your techniques. So by simply knowing how to throw a punch you have a massive advantage over someone who solely focuses on techniques, and with the way everyone I've seen fight uses martial arts they probably came to the same conclusion. Martial arts are what separates the sheep from the wolves and I hoped to turn every girl I'm fucking or planning on fucking into only the cutest blood-thirsty wolves.

"I...I think I've got it!" A pink transparent haze surrounded her as she spoke, and when my hand went to pat her head it slipped off of the slippery surface of her aura.

"Excellent, now can you channel the aura into your fist?" Her eyes closed as she focused, her tongue sticking out as the pink aura surrounding her flickered like a flame losing oxygen.

"Fuck!" A groan of frustration left her lips as the aura flickered out entirely, the effect of [Transmutation] wearing off revealed the clear aura of geist surrounding her.

"Describe what happened." I encouraged her as I ruffled her hair, the girl giving me a shy smile before opening her mouth.

"It felt like I was trying to cram a ton of bubblegum in my mouth and then trying to blow a bubble with it. It felt like I had too much geist and not enough control." As she spoke she gestured toward her mouth with her hand. My eyes were drawn to her soft lips that I wanted to do nothing more than kiss. She seemed to notice as she smirked at me before leaning forward and puckering her lips. After maybe a few quick pecks and some light petting I was back to teacher mode as I laid out what she might be doing wrong.

"What is a bubbles weakness?" I asked as I sat down on the table I had just used to fuck her silly on, my ass sat far away from the femcum soaking the other half of the table.

"A point?"

"Correct, and when you channeled all of your bubble aura in your hand what did you create?"

"A point!"

"Yep, I was wrong about it being easier for you to mix your bubble aura in the circuits near your heart. Try this time mixing the aura in your hand, imagine a swirling void of air and water aura giving way to your unique aura." As I spoke she nodded before once again concentrating, a white haze of geist shrouded her body before concentrating in the palm of her hand.

The geist began swirling as the two auras of air and water tinged the energy blue and yellow. Wait, why would her bubble aura be pink when blue and yellow make green? Could it be that she intentionally changes the color of her aura for an entirely aesthetic reason? Damn now I'm curious, and as my eyes watched the swirling vortex of elemental aura in her hand turn green for the briefest of seconds before flickering pink I had my answer. She whether intentionally or not was changing the color of her aura adding a whole layer of complexity to her control.

"It's much easier, so what's next?" She looked at the dark pink haze radiating from her palm with a look of wonder.

"Focus on that target over there, and when you have sufficiently concentrated on it and the attack your hand will make you strike. You'll be able to feel with superhuman clarity the moment when your aura makes contact with the target and that is your trigger, release everything built up inside your hand." The target itself was an umbral construct built from the shadow of the table I sat on. The thing was a black silhouette of a man and as it stood their Fumiko prepared to strike.

Her delicate caramel fingers clenched in a fist as the pink aura surrounding her hand flared. A deep breath filled her lungs as her eyes trained on the target as if it were the only thing in the world. She planted her lead foot and her sexy hips twisted as her arm turned into a whip. The target black face stood no chance as her aura-clad fist shattered through it, but something was wrong. While the attack was impressive it didn't distort the ambient geist in the atmosphere or create a pocket of her aura, and her aura didn't release inside of the target to devastating effect. In simple terms, she hadn't succeeded in learning [Psuedo Resonance].

"Not bad, but you kept glancing at me the entire time instead of the target, can you tell me why?" She blushed at my gentle chiding, the tips of her ears growing red from embarrassment.

"B-because when I look at you my heart goes doki-doki and if you're in the room my eyes just naturally drift towards you!" I paused, a little heat coming to my own face at the sweet little confession.

"I-I see, well then would it help you to visualize the target as me?" I asked as I rubbed the back of my neck, my eyes suddenly very interested in the fine craftsmanship of the tatami mat floor.

"No, I couldn't hurt Daddy!"

"Hmm—oh, I've got it!" I leaned forward and took her lips by surprise, it was a chaste kiss but Fumiko's eyes seemed to cloud over with lust at just a mere touch. "If you can hit that target with [Pseudo Resonance] I'll give you more." My voice grew husky as I closed the distance again and pecked at her jaw sending a jolt of pleasure through her body.

Trailing kisses along her chin I eventually reached her neck where I licked and nibbled at her beautiful caramel skin sending shudders down her spine. Fumiko's breathing grew rough and her hands had taken to petting my dick through the fabric of my sweatpants. Before I could give into the cloying aura of lust growing between us I pulled away.

"D-daddy?" Fumiko was left standing there, her eyes damp with arousal. Her thick thighs rubbed against each other as she tried to suppress the raging inferno that was her core. She bit her lip as she looked down at the towering tent my erection created in my pants, she desperately wanted it.

"You have to hit the target first before we can continue." I grinned my fingers gripping at the waistband of my pants as I slowly pulled them down. It was kind of comical to do a strip-tease as a guy but Fumiko seemed to like it as one of her slender little hands tried reaching inside of her spats. "Ah, ah, ah, no masturbating either."

Her hand paused just above her shaven mound, her lust warring with her desire to obey me. In the end and with no small amount of reluctance Fumiko removed her hands from the inside of her tight workout shorts. Her pouting lips and puffed-up cheeks along with the hmph sound she made only contributed to her cuteness.

My pants were now down around my ankles, I hadn't bothered to give myself underwear in my mind space after we fucked the first time so my massive erection was revealed in all of it's throbbing glory. While Fumiko watched with hungry eyes I spat in my hand before I began slowly stroking my dick. The massive girth of it meant that even my large hand struggled to fully wrap around the veiny monster. I hadn't measured but if I were to give a conservative estimate I would say I was around 10 inches, and if I was bragging I'd say 13 inches. This meant that one single stroke of my dick felt like a road trip as my spit-lubed hand pumped up and down around my shaft.

"This can all be yours if you use [Psuedo Resonance]!" Precum dripped from the tip of my cock staining the tatami mat below. Fumiko licked her lips at the sight before taking a stance across from the training dummy.

She radiated geist from her body, the white haze congregating around the palm of her right hand in a spiraling pattern. After her geist had been suitably condensed the color of the energy flickered yellow and blue as she transmuted her geist into the two elemental auras. As the auras mixed they turned green before flickering to the color pink, a bubble grew from her fist as she stepped forward to deliver the devastating blow.

"[Pseudo Resonance: Cavitation Bomb]!" The pink bubble exploded with a devastating boom, her mind space rattling as a blinding flash of light stung my eyes. After blinking away the tears forming in my eyes I looked at the utter devastation of her ability.

The shadow construct was gone, a charred circular crater was all that remained of where he stood. The bubble aura had pushed out all of the geist in the atmosphere and when it collapsed back in on the vacuum created by the bubble the friction of the geist heated the air to the temperature of the surface of the sun. It was an impressive display of power.

"Very good, you should be ready to do it for real when you exit your mind space." I walked toward her, my cock making it awkward as it bounced around with each step. Fumiko was taken out of her reverie as she watched my dick bounce with a lascivious grin, and then my words registered with her.

"Wait what do you mean for real, didn't I just do it!?" She asked incredulously even as I was right in front of her, my arm grabbing one of her plush caramel thighs as I lifted her leg up. My other hand reached for her spats as I simply tore a hole in the skintight fabric revealing her drooling pussy.

"Your mind space is disconnected from the Weltgeist so any enlightenment you could gain from [Psuedo Resonance] is missing. It's also why when you messed up your first attempt you didn't lose your access to elemental aura because the restricting process of [Elemental Resonance] was also not in play. The whole point of image training like this was to allow you to train without limits and help you visualize when you do the real thing, now enough talk!" My cock sheathed itself inside of her with a single thrust, a loud moan escaping her lips as the tip of my dick kissed her cervix.

Fumiko looked at me with wide eyes and I responded with a cheeky grin, I did say she could have it if she achieved [Psuedo Resonance] after all. The fun had only just begun.


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