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•Wish fullfilment
•Tensura Fanfic
a girl hit by a truck and died , get reincarnated in tensura with wishes
just for fun
sorry for bad grammar
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a typical fanfic the grammar is not that good but your new to this so good luck ...........................................................
So frist mc is too op even rimuru didn't become op over night just got reborn ultimate skill of it was so easy to an ultimate skill veldora would not be in the cave. Frist mc into a low class fox/wolf monster not a friging S class. Human form already it took rimuru multiple episodes to get a human form please stop it and don't just fuse skills without even explaining the skills and fusion. Do it over and improve I see a lot of potential in your writing now toodles