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Wish Breaker: The Battlemage Academy

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作者: Malyjax

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Everyone has a magical ability called a wish, some use them for everyday things, others use them for glorious battle in the arenas. Kaos has long had a dream of fighting in the arenas, but the only problem is his wish is a support ability. Surrounded by legends in the making, Kaos will have to surpass the limits of his wish, or break it in the process.

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So it’s obviously me writing my own review, but I just wanted to talk about the stuff I wrote a bit in a place that wasn’t just the end of chapter comments. I am writing this, because I love reading fantasy manga and light novels. I create video games as a hobby, and as a part of my hobby became my job, I guess I needed something else, and this is just a way that I can try and be creative and learn something new. I gave it 5 stars because I am trying my best, and honestly I don’t cringe when I read my own chapters (totally thought I would, but I actually like my characters) if you have any feedback or suggestions, please leave comments on the chapters to help me learn more about what is actually good writing, and what is just something really lame, anyway… hope you enjoy it!

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Haven’t made it super far, but it already seems like it’s licking up in pace. The setting is different from most fantasy web-novels, but not so much that it feels jarring to read. Interested to see where this goes!

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PixelGrass

Story is really good, but the author is definitely new to writing, as they say themself in like every little "author's comments" thing. The writing was a bit more clunky towards the beginning, but it's definitely gotten a little better later on.

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