/ Eastern / While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
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概要
Did I reincarnate? Or was I transported to an Isekai cultivation world? To be honest, I have no clue!
What matters is that I turned from being useless, bullied, and trash, to fully-fledged garbage in my new cultivation world!
But what is this strange bleep that keeps ringing in my ears? Is this some kind of system? Oh God! Did you gift me such a cliché, right at the start of my journey?
Wait, why are you trying to kill me? Did I do something to you? Stand back or I will be forced to use unstoppable Exhudia!
Tell me, what did she do for you to treat your significant other in this way? Let me show you how girlfriends should be taken care of!
Wait, everyone was always telling me that demons are bad, so why is this demonic queen trying to seduce me? Wait! KEEP YOUR HANDS AWAY FROM MY PRECIOUS SWORD!
I just came back from a mission and was promised at least a half a year of break. Why are you bothering me again with something as silly as subjugating a devil general?
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レビューを書くRenowned author DemotivatedSloth returns with an incredible work of deep symbolism and meaning. His most recent work-- or better put, his newest piece of sacred artwork descended from the holy muses of writing-- "While others cultivate, I use RPG leveling system to cultivate their girlfriends", creates a lasting impact on the reader from the very first word in the novel, "get". Every single word in DemotivatedSloth's writing brings deep, hidden messages along with it, with the themes being so complex that even the most skilled readers or critics would be unable to decipher all of its value. The artwork centers on a character with the name of "Bart". As described in the writing, he was a "classical" American teenager until reincarnating into a completely different world through a god who took pity on his tragic death. From this premise, DemotivatedSloth picks up an unique idea that no author has ever attempted before. As the story continues on, more and more unexpected events occur, each event symbolic of deeper messages. Quite frankly, as the reader attempts to absorb this immense and powerful language of DemotivatedSloth, they will find that it's quite difficult to truly comprehend the beauty and value of his work. In fact, the concepts and motifs that DemotivatedSloth represents within his novel proves that only one who has ascended to the level of a pure literary genius would be able to comprehend the absolute depth of his work. Most particularly, the reader receives quite a deep emotional blow after reading about the "babies" in Chapter Two. DemotivatedSloth presents the first challenge to the main character with the symbolic babies which absolutely represent certain values such as the cycle of life and human incapability or weakness. By introducing said babies, the value of the work raises to a whole other level of new insight. These babies could be considered as the most incredible part of the novel so far. Overall, the stunning "While others cultivate, I use RPG leveling system to cultivate their girlfriends" sets a whole new standard in the literary field and industry. It would be belittling to give this artwork a full five stars, almost. In the future, this novel will be the work that every young writer looks up to, earning its place as an incredibly unique classic in the history of Webnovels.
A powerful Novel. The author was has been known for several decades of uninteresting novels with mediocre plot and messages has finally stepped up to the standart we've had from his earlier years. A completely original plot and tropes, filled with powerful messages about today's society. This novel tackles every modern day problem while being a eastern fantasy novel. The exquisite writing of the author that reminds us of his first best-seller " Reincarnated in Highschool DxD with a cultivation CEO system as a Harem God with my pokemons " that, although a gritty and sensational fan fiction, didn't make it to the oscars, is only surpassed by the powerful messages that each pages deliver. From Capitalism to oversexualization, every problem is denounced and analized in this novel, even the feminazi will like it. The main character, whom I shall not name for spoiler reason, is the symbolism of hope for better days in a dystopian monarchy controled by the evil 'cultivators'. This novel will make you laugh, will make you cry, but you will alaways, at each chapter, become more, grow as the main character goes through tribulations, and encounter characters as well written as himself. The story of the world depicted is fleshed out perfectly, you will feel immersed in a torrent of emotions and information in this novel. Overall, this novel is a phenomenon that will transcend even Webnovel and may very well become the next beacon of modern literature.
Sorry about this .... I find the idea of the novel promising. However i keep finding it lacking... Take this as point to improve. 1. You need to explain always how stats work. Dont put stats like str agi int char res without proper explaining what they are for. 2. You need to stick with the idea that mc is a isekai/reincarnated person from earth. So he should probably know how to play any for of rpg games. However for the the last 30+ chapter i have read the mc dont give a **** at all. 3. What is the mechanic of his system. How does he gain the skills. What is the use of level up. How many free stat point do he gain every lvl. No explaination was given thus making the whole thing confusing. 4. Explain the power ranking of the world. Explain the world his on more. Its not like earth you know. His leveling up how does everybody else getting strong. It not like his the only person strong in the story.
Now this is a novel of the ages! HAHAHA! Thanks for writing this author! Can't wait for the next chapters! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! More please! ^_^
ネタバレを明かすMan the author forgets about the novel name and start cultivation novel. the author is also inconsistent and things are mix and hard to understand sometimes.
Ok, I really like the start and I hate it from the moment it enters the Arena City. The story between Eve and him was perfect, but like any other novel (unfortunately) something serious must have happened to her (too cliché). After that, several point that disappoint me. - At the beginning a discussion with Eve that Stella was his and that it didn't bother Eve that he has other girls, but that totally changes some chapter later - He goes back to see Pengu later, but in no case goes to see Stella? or the first "toy" and future sect leader? one of the moments that started making me stop reading the novel - The death of Lucia (or Lucie?) (The Inn girl) and yeah a toy too. - Abandon Helia, for whom he was starting to have feelings. - What happenned to Katia and Elea? - Ok, there’s the problem with his soul, but frankly it becomes nonsense extract Eve's soul by ejaculating in a powerful woman, lol? - No more 18+ scenes for a while, ok, he only likes and wants Eve, but change the name of the Novel then! - "Smut Romance with THEIR Girlfriends, but after 500 chapters he still have one.
ネタバレを明かすHello guys, Author here! While this is my meme novel, I find a lot of joy writing it. While you might find it cliche, this was my entire purpose for writing it. I want to combine all most selling points in WN, and create a great parody of it while keeping a good plot and funny action enact! I hope you will enjoy the read!
Cool universe but the title has nothing to do with the story, a romance where the MC is too guilty to have any other partner... all smut power to have any women but unwilling... If you dont consider the tittle you might like it
First of all till now I wasn't able to find the novel validating it's introduction and obviously the name....Above all MC character seems like a bit idiotic yeah sometimes changes were appreciable to uplift the mood but most of the story being filled with his hypocritical and delusional thoughts with least of the story development even after above 150+ chapts....Hoping the pacing improve as the story proceeds..
An incredible work of art. The story got me hooked in the first chapter. I love the plot. The bad part is that it doesn't contain a legendary sword that can shoot ultraviolet beams.
Sadly I never enjoy flawed systems and insanely stupid MC's. Eve knowing her family's power and tactics would never advocate her name like that so overall this is a great dissapointment in story direction.
It's all fun and games, if you read novel where Mc bickering with a system first time. Awhile after though, it's just annoying. So, if you're already tired from stories where system is a greedy useless ****, don't begin.
I started reading this Story because author says it is a meme novel. First 10-20 chapter are actually pretty funny, but that's pretty much gone after that. Don't see any difference between this story and any other isekai system cultivation novel.
To many holes in the writing... there could be improvements, but the jumps are bad, the mc is trash because everything seem to be rushed and random in the story... I read up to 176 chapters and I think I am dropping this... good luck.
Though I have a few bits to criticize, it's good so far. The first, and most important, is that all the dialogue sounds like the same person. It helps a lot with fleshing out a character to give them a unique voice. It doesn't have to be as large a change as Yoda or as obvious as the "desu" some authors plant at the end of a sentence, but it really helps if something changes based on who's talking. It also helps break the feeling that you're reading someone tell you a story instead of reading a story. Another thing to remember is that events in reality have a pace to them. It can be easy to write paragraphs about the thought process in the moment, and maybe that's how it actually happened in their head, but readers either lack the speed of thought or the IRL influence forcing their attention so it draws ******* out of a situation. If the situation is easy or doesn't require their attention, that makes sense, but if it's a desperate or intense situation it can disconnect the reader from the story. Basically, try to keep the intensity of the reader's experience the same as what's going through the MC's head.
With his title above all, distinguished author, MotivatedSloth brought back with him another amazing piece of art. The title, -- 'While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends! -- has attracted hundreds of thousands of fellow cultivators like myself. With the amazing quality and godly writing techniques, he has dominated the writing field all over again. Formally known as 'Bart', the protagonist of this well written and planned out chronicle was once an 'above average' American teenager. However, after an unfortunate accident he was unwillingly reincarnated without luck or god on his side. But fate was on his side, gaining an incredible system, follow Bart as he travels the new world seducing and captivating hearts of young maidens. Overall, with the exceptional chapters that have been released so far, we will have no idea how far MotivatedSloth can go. Harnessing the power of writing could lead you towards the light or the dark. But, keep this in mind, "The path you walk is not a simple and easy one, many tribulations and challenges await you in the future." Be sure to cultivate properly. Freelance cultivator, Fotia
I cant quite put into words how it feels to read this as when i began it was pretty cringy for the first 100 or so chapters then it slowly left only to be replaced by randomness wether it be with the stalling of the plot or most importantly semmingly making the main character op for the first 250 chapter only the then be useless and i wont even attemt to try to understand the thinking behind the mc thoughts all in all i would not recommend this as theirs far better ones in the same genre and it just feels like the story was made to feel cringy and a bit of a mess in terms of how its structured
I really enjoyed the story so far but as the story progresses it is becoming less lighthearted and feels as turning to a more tragic plot line, rather then a comical lighthearted adventure as the synopsis lead to believe. I definitely feel it still will be an interesting read for those who like the more serious setting of endless setbacks that the MC suffers and how he solves them. Anyways thanks to the author for an enjoyable first 100 chapters.
Honestly, my biggest problem is the lack of basic spelling, and intentionally spelling **** wrong, admiral amurica, really? Just use the real ****, who cares, it's nothing but annoying and adds nothing. Literally tanks this book to the point from I want to read this until it finishes to I might drop it. Or spelling different as difernt. Use basic ms word or grammerly m8, or just go through paragraph comments, every one is outlined in them months ago, you can't take 1 day off writing new chapters to fix the rest? You could even do like a discord thing for future chapters with unedited chaps, where they can read there and tell you any errors, I've seen other books do it and improve significantly
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This is a story that strikes a unique balance, a realistic balance. The mc is not a smartass, badass, or a emo drama con like most of the other novels. The protagonist has more realistic behaviour than most stories, with his unique character flaws and quirks. Both negative and positive aspects. Hence when reading this book, you have to keep in mind that it's not a story about you or your hero, but a unique realistic character. He makes mistakes, he gets lazy time to time, sometime he panicks, and sometimes he banters, but those are in small amounts and personal quirks. Most of the time he is smooth and cool. The other characters (most non villains) are like that realistic, each with their personal quirks, both good and bad, albeit sometimes a bit weird. But that's on the aspect on it's in a cultivation world, different culture, different perspectives. And lastly this has hands down the best system so far, like a good partner also with it's own unique quirks! On the other hand if you readers enjoy reading something that is not OP, badass, smart ass, get all the girls harem king, picture perfect, god and demon worships hero. But a rather more slow realistic pacing and approach, even with it's own setbacks from certain situations. Then you will definitely love it. The only down side of this book is, that like so many other author, has more other works, and thus makes the chapter quite short. While an author might think he needs to keep up with daily releases. It's not a big deal if it's a chapter every 2 or 3 days. That way readers can still enjoy it after coming back after a week or 2. But noooooo, the horrors! Sometimes the chapter so short, that you won't even feel like reading anything even after bingeing 2 chapters. Thankfully it's only some chapters like that. I wish you all a good read, support the author by atleast unlocking chapters by paid coins, and hopefully stockpile 10 chapters before each read.