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作者: daydreamtowrite

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Natasha Lee was known to be the "Queen of Hearts" by her school because of her lovely look. She received countless love letters, chocolates, flowers, and even a bouquet of flowers on her school desk or her school locker or from someone who had the guts to give it directly. But she didn't reciprocate because she wanted to think of her studies and her future first and foremost and besides she didn't want to get tangled with the word called love.

On a peaceful afternoon, after school, she went to the nearest McDonald's around her school to meet with her best friend, Cassie Sanders. But she didn't expect to encounter a senior from her school, Lawrence Price, who was forcing her to hang out with him. She was ready to fight back with a technique that her mother taught, but Baker Cinnamon stepped in, introducing himself as her boyfriend!?

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Hello, Readers. Before you read this story, I want you to read this pinned review first. I'm listing down the reasons why your time wouldn't be a waste if you read "what happened?". Let's start! Writing Quality: I admit. English isn't my first language. But I have the skill to compose or read English. I also have Grammarly installed to check the spelling or grammar errors and suggest synonyms so repetitive words wouldn't occur that much. Stability of Updates: I can update daily. If I can't, I will update after one, two, or three days. I'm trying to update fast as soon as I can. You can check the release dates of each chapter as proof. I can update two chapters if the reader demands it, or if I'm in the mood to do so. Story Development: If you're a fan of friendships, family, slow-paced, and romance, I think you will find this story good. I can assure you this would have a twist even if you see some cliches in here. Character Design: I've designed each Character based on their roles. World Background: It's not complicated to understand the setting since it's based on Modern Fiction. If you're kind enough, please do support this book through leaving chapter or paragraph comments, vote with your power stone, add it to your library, leave a review (a constructive one please), or donate in my Ko-Fi account: https://ko-fi.com/daydreamtowrite Thank you for reading this.

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amaichara

hi! i saw author's novel in the **** section while i was searching for something good and i actually am glad that i gave it a try because it is to my liking..i really like how the story unfolds.. there were scenes that were unexpected..like they caught me off guard.. great storyline! please keep up the good work!! ^^

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mange4everPD

I’m not use to a story where there’s no death in the first chapter 😱. This seems to be a light change of pace storyline . The female lead’s beauty causes her lots of issues ,can i please get this problem 😳

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Shionokami

I will be honest any story that remotely reminds me of an anime, makes not be curious, it makes me give it my full attention, this is what this one did. the first few lines made hve flashbacks of the good old days of the romantic comedies I watched (and still do), honestly I liked everything here from the characters to the relationships they have with one other, and to make it even better it's well written witch is allways a big plus. All in all this was a good read and I will surely come back for more!

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SnowPenguin

The story is well written with amazing characterisation work done through the character's dialogue and descriptions.

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Esther_Heredia

I must say that I really like to watch teenage movies, but I really LOVE reading books like this. Your story, in particular, I liked the way the main character thinks because she's not the typical pretty girl who only thinks about romance. She knows what she wants and puts her future first. Even when she falls into the nets of love, but that's okay, the heart doesn't command. Keep it up. Your story will go far because many people love youthful stories.

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Mel_Aniv

Nice start author! I am impressed by how you narrate things and the dialogues was neat and clean. So far, I haven't seen typos and my reading runs smoothly. This deserves to be in the spotlight in the future. So write more and don't stop! Your readers will be with you. Waiting for your updates. BTW please also review mine called "Waking Up In Undead World". It has a slow start but the juicy part will start in chapter ten. Happy reviewing!

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basementerz

Dear author, your book are totally great. Just wanted to say that I find your story are totally interesting! Please keep up your excellent work 😆😆 Also, if you have time kindly check out my book too![img=recommend]

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