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概要
The story of an ordinary person who due to his actions saved thousands of lives by gathering massive positive karmic points leading to reincarnation as the twin of one of the protagonists of the voltron universe, now she must learn to survive a possible war against a race of alien colony. whose fate his brother faces and faces them, and relearn to live in a wrong gender body.
Good thing she has a system.
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It's great so far but I did notice that alot of paragraphs/sentences repeated and that the pronouns changes along and the going from Luan to their first lives name
what is author writing, synopsis say past life male reborn female while in chapter say female reborn male 😒
As long as you know the voltron show you can understand it. The story development is slower than most reincarnation fanfics (BTW author you should probably either speed it up or put more plot development for the chapters because user retention is not so good for fanfics). The subplot of the NC being a girl in a boy's body is weird at the start but gets resolved quite quickly but having the changes from between girl and boy is confusing though most of the time the word boy is used for a physical action while girl is used for a mental action which makes sense but is still confusing. So far the fanfic seems as though the future is bright and it will be interesting.