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This is the trilogy created by the human who became a god, previously known as Landon, now known as Sumato.
Sumato is the supreme kai of the newly made universe 13, with the aid of angel Absin he begins his journey to develop the strongest universe possible!
"Ah... I died."
"Oh?? I get a chance to reincarnate?"
"I guess I am a supreme kai now."
"Oh hello, Grand Priest-sama."
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It’s pretty original then all the other dragon ball fics my main question would be why be birthed in U13 when you could have been born in U 7 now wouldn’t that be an interesting thing even as a supreme Kai you could have more ideas and chapters since it’s canon and all but in U13 you’ll have to build everything from scratch. At least in U7 with your skills and power you would be able to argue with beerus and not be afraid of him. But anyhow let’s see where this goes good luck
OMG I love it! Please keep writing! This concept is very unique to the dragon ball fan fiction genre! I can't wait to see how it develops, and please no harem!
Unique take on dragon ball, can't wait to see how sumata will create evil races and righteous ones and focus on the conflict between them, would be pretty cool if later on down the line you focus of the pov's of some mortal races to have a better understanding on how their society works.
This is a new story with great potential- and reviewing the first few chapters, the grammar is good, the character seems okay for the most part and the story or rather plot is promising. A great story- and I would hope it is not turned into something like a harem- Ciao
A bit quick paced so far, but the concept and writing quality are amazing and it as a lot of potential! Please dont drop this fanfic I cant wait to see how things turn out!!!
Interesting! This has a lot of potential. Can add all the animes into his universe is he wants. Another good thing is, it doesn't even have to be anime, it can be anything.
it's a original as far as I can tell I've never seen someone get reborn as a supreme Kai and make his own universe in the dragon Ball world I'm super excited for more I love universe building FanFictions Please don't drop!!!
Perfecto me encanta sigue con el buen trabajo . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... ... . . . . . . . . .
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Alright dude, I am rating this cause I like this fic, to be honest I've never read a Supreme Kai fic, this is a first and I am liking it so far. It has great potential, still I want to know if you a re gonna do the mass realease tho!?? Also is MC gonna be stronger than Jiren than if he doesn't want anyone above him on his universe!??????
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Good job on the story and character build, keep up the good work. =P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P
Shameless 5 star review! This will be a long ride so why don't you give it a read? This is going to be a very, very unique Dragon Ball fanfiction!