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The world's top underworld martial artists Shawn Nixon dies in his pursuit of strength, after traveling the world and studying all the secret martial arts manuals by any means including, robbing, plundering, and killing he proceeds to create his own martial art manual with an unbelievable development. He developed a ki manual even though the various secret arts of Earth proclaimed to be able to develop ki or build ki by means of strengthening the body, none of it actually worked!! Excited he trained for years, closed himself off from the rest of the world abandoning it. Years passed........achieving what he assumed was the limit he challenged himself to do what he believed was his only chance at a breakthrough to surpass the limitations of the feeble human body!
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Hey! , why are you reading this...scroll up and read the novel, idiot! - OH YEAH! REEeeEeEeeeEEEeeEeeEeeeeEEEEeeeEEeEeeEEEeEeeEEEEEEEEEeeeeEEEeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeEEEEeeEeEEeEeEEEEEEEeeeeeeeEEE
I hope you would continue this novel because I like those types and people never continue them. I WILL give you stones! Ooh i forgot to say I read your past novel and I really enjoyed it very much so don't let me down.
update review........ stability of updates 1star.... two weeks no updates....everything else are rated the same as my first review 1star in stability of updates basically means its one of those sleeper fics that takes a long time to update... hope this changes in the future
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
Awesome story thus far, looking forward to more chapters. Can definetly see the potential of the story. Only 2 chaps out now but happy overall.
I love the way you made your Mc, Neither a Hypocrite, nor a Demon. If you stay out of his path, he won’t give a damn about you. I really hope you don’t drop this Novel love many other. Only warlock of Magus World is the only Novel with the same type of Mc and is completed.
Writing quality is passable, but could be improved. A little "." and "," could make the sentences better. Some words/phrases are repeated or redundant and must have escaped the author's notice. Updates are uncertain for now. Still too early to decide if its stable, or if its once in a week. Story development is interesting so far. Pacing is ok. As for character design, MC is ok. Interesting backstory. Lacks background on why MC is a killer and not an assassin. Plot is good. I see that author took a little AI chip from Leylin. :) Overall, quite a good start for this novel. Definitely a different league from author's previous work. Kudos and well done for improving.
Good backstory author san, by the way, will mc be evil/battle maniac/indifferent? Hope mc and train his own troop and conquer the universe,
Writing quality 4.5/5 - the writing is good but not perfect, youll find small mistakes if you read slowly, but in a glance they are easily ignored Stability of updates 3/5 - that lower score is there because as of this review there are only 3 chapters Story Development 3/5 - has a good premise, mcs background story is a little bit over the top Character Design 4/5 - for a fanfic getting a 3 in char design is a high score but because of the OC here being the main point in all 3 chapters he carries the story quite well World Background 5/5 - its a Dragonball world that incorporates some canon facts with Fan made speculations that makes sense sooo it has great WB all in all this has the potential, hope the author keeps writing more, while it may not be the type of novel that i will craze about, i will still read this too pass the time