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Dan Montgomery was just your average powerless dude living in a world filled with Heroes Vs Villains battles every other day. He one day received the kickass system he always dreamed of having, but never truly wanted. He just wanted to be a normal guy in a not so normal world, but fate just had other plans for him.
(Note: The Slice of Life tag is there since a lot of the beginning part of the story takes place in normal life.)
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The way his power works is very interesting and I like the direction the story is going tbh i just wish there were more chapters I could read.
You are going overboard on the observe power, providing far too much information. Feels like constant info dumps. Which I personally skip. Can be improved. Otherwise, looking forward to the story overall.
I love the way the idea was implemented. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting power. Really good story potential if executed properly. I’ve seen many evolution and adaptation power fics, but this one is definitely done in a unique manner.