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Twelve-12

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作者: RonSam

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Twelve commoners who are living a boring, sad, sick lives are invited to a secret meeting in a grand hotel. The meeting was hosted by a secret society and they are forced to partcicipate in a contest where all the 12 should hunt each other in the open world and the last one standing wins and recieves a huge cash prize. As the game starts each of them finds out that the others aren't commeners..... just like them....

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PowerGamer41

Sir I think that when before posting a chapter you should proof read the chapter first to make sure it flows better also it appears that you are posting short chapters just remember you writing speed will increase the more you write so don't give up. Also look up the a video called Will power is for losers and down load the cold Turkey Blocker along with getting someone that would help yo get off of stuff to help you write more. Also when outlining your story use the words therefor and but look up how to write a pilot episode by Studio binder that should help you plot your story better ok bye hope you write well.

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Seshadhri_S

Very interesting writing. The description of the place were really detailed and the end twist keeps me waiting for the next chapter. Keep up.

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Bharani_Sai_S

To be honest, I generally don’t read. But, this one caught my attention. Loved the way how it got started. Eagerly waiting for more chapters.....

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Surya_Kanth

Good and interesting writing. Liked it very much, worth for spending time. Character design of each of them is impressive. This must reach to next level.

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