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章 1: Prologue (In earth)

I was born in a normal family with caring parents. When I was one and a half years old I already talk fluently and by the time I was 3, I could solve Elementary school problem with ease. Even though I was a prodigy I never got to know any real friends since all of the students just get close to me for asking about the lesson and stuff. They never really interact with me on anything else. But one day, I met a girl she's called Eina, she's so beautiful and perfect in my eyes. So I took the initiative to get close to her and we quickly become close friends. We got similar interest and she's really smart too.

A few months have passed by, Eina and I became really close, we're practically almost always together. A few years have passed now we're in Middle school and I finally got the courage to confessed to her. Then I confessed to her and she accepted. Making me really happy and I tell the news to my parents. Also, I found out that I could make things disappear and appear at my will when I was messing around like some light novel and stuff. I got really excited when I found out about this but was also scared what about they found out about my ability would they do something bad to me?

A few years had gone by, I and Eina are now married. I become one of the richest men on earth. After the wedding, I decided that I would tell her about my ability and the expression she makes after hearing it are priceless. She asked me a lot of question and I answered all of them since I trusted her. But one day, Eina invited me out which wasn't common.

"Hey Eina what do you called me here for ?" I asked her, "Could you get closer ?" She said I got closer to her but what happened surprised me, She suddenly charged toward me and tased me with a taser gun. Before my consciousness fade away I saw her taking off her hair turns out she's an imposter, in my mind, I was thinking where she is and hope that she's safe.

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I got tied up on a chair and was blindfolded. When the blindfold was released. My heart was broken to pieces when I saw something disturbing my wife was lying on the floor lifelessly. I asked the one who released my blindfold about what happened. He said that she was tortured to spill my secret and she refused to and we're gonna **** her but when she heard that she killed herself since she wasn't being tied up she grabbed a knife and slit her own throat. He then gave me looked at the scene of she killing herself over and over again

When I hear that I got mad, and seeing the video I reached my mental capacity limit. Then my mind went blank after a few while I regained my sanity and looked around. Around me, there's a puddle of blood and bodies everywhere. Suddenly I remembered that I got crazy and started using my abilities removing the rope and killing the man. The I escaped from the place and I got accused of killing and being an alien. So I was hunted down. My and my wife parents, relative, even friends all of them got tortured, captured, and killed just to know about me and my abilities. I spent almost everyday hunting down the people who did that and when I'm going to kill the last one and after that hide and live as a normal human again. I got caught in a trap and finally got captured.

I don't know how but they got a material which could restrain my abilities. So, I was brought to a secret lab where they do a lot of inhuman experiments. I was Tortured almost every time. The torture ranged from being impaled with stakes of wood, got stabbed and whipped, electrocuted, and even burned. Every living second is like hell to me. It hurts so much I wanted to die.

~A few months had passed since that day I was captured~

I was sitting on my chair, in my cell room there's only a bed, a chair, and a mirror. I got a bath once every week and my meals really suck. It's taste like shit. My condition isn't so great but isn't too bad. I basically got numb to pain because of the harsh torture they gave me. In the torture, I went through my body kept on breaking and healing that it becomes strong enough to block steel and heal fast enough that minor wounds heal faster. It's kind of a blessing but now they're shooting me with guns and electricity still works against me. I kept on wondering where do they found the material that could restrain me.

Then the room door opened and a guard started to yell at me to follow his experiments are going to happen again. I sighed at this and just comply. In my time getting tortured I wonder if Eina is watching over me and is revenge truly what she really wants. I was broken out of my thought when the doctor started to torture me again. What I truly wished right now is to meet Eina again even if it's for a small moment and die after I saw her again. But I know it won't happen why? Because she's dead and I won't be able to see her again.

Then when the torture was almost done, There's sudden explosion everywhere the facility started to explode and walls are crumbling. 'At least I died, I hope I could saw her again my first and last love.' I then died got crushed by the building.

~In the void~

You could see a handsome young standing there in an empty space. "Huh, so this is the afterlife." I started to look around and saw nothing but black and I couldn't even feel that I'm standing. "This isn't like anything described by people, people said that afterlife is hell or heaven so why am I in this blank space ?", Then suddenly a sound resounded in my head. 'Do you want to be able to get revenge?' It startled me, I then ponder for a while. "No, I don't want it. Even if I do my wife would be angry at me." The voice then talked again, 'What a surprise normally after someone got tortured like that they would seek revenge.' After a bit of silence, 'I decided that I would let you travel the multiverse to reach the apex and hopefully you could gain the power to breakthrough into the god's realm.'

I then felt my whole body ached for awhile then the pain was gone. I was wondering what happened and the voice answered, 'I gave you the power to travel to another universe when you reach the apex of each world and If you gain enough power then you can go to the god's realm.' "So I needed to reach the apex of each world huh?". 'Yes, and remember each world had different power level so you could just pass worlds with similar/lower power than yours and strive to be the top.' I wonder if with my power I could revive my wife. "Hey, could I revive my wife if I get enough power to do it?" The voice responded with 'You could indeed revive dead people but you need be powerful enough to oppose the backlash of doing it. Since you're reviving the dead, you'll be going against the natural laws, If they're dead anyway." I couldn't hear the last part but I thought that maybe when I get powerful enough I get to meet her again. 'Anyways I wish you good luck.' Before I could say anything, I was then enveloped in a light ball and disappear from the void.

~In another void~

A girl was standing and looked towards the horizon with a longing look. Then a figure appeared behind her and tapped her shoulder. She got startled and looked behind. "Eina, you should be more relaxed don't worry nothing would happen to him. You should believe in him more." The figure said with a gentle voice. If Hino was here then he would recognize this voice similar as the voice which talked to him inside his head. "I know dad, but was it necessary for me to die in front of him and at a cruel and weird way on top of that." She said with a little anger and sadness. The figure then stroked his chin and after a while, he said "The process needed to happen for him to awaken his SIW which was lying dormant in his soul for a while right now and since the earth is a peaceful place he would never awaken it."Eina still glaring at him, he then sighed and give in "How about this I reincarnate you with him but you would get your memory sealed?"

Eina looks at her dad with a happy face, "It's at least better than nothing, I maybe would get to experience falling in love with him again." She hugged him. Her dad just smiled and stroke her hair and then release her from the hug and clapped his hand. "I hope you good luck, my daughter." He said and Eina just nodded at him "Okay." Eina then was enveloped in a light ball and got transported. After she disappeared her dad then thought 'I hope I made the right choice since he could be a blessing or a disaster, let's hope that he's the former and wasn't the latter.' He sighed then just leave it at that.


クリエイターの想い
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A more complex prologue and a better one at that. The rewritten story had only a little similarities with the original one so be sure to read this rewritten one.

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