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After death a man finds himself, in a place he would have never thought. When a god doesn’t allow him to pick certain wishes and with holds more pressing information. Watch as he moves into a world from his past life, one he thought to be fantasy. Finding his way and where he fits in to all of this. A man who never knew anything but violence, love was never kind but that never stopped him. In this world even in this situation watch as he tries to change his life, find love, and fight to enjoy this new life.
The Mc is strong as hell, doesn’t mean he will one shot everyone. This has drama in it, love and fighting. In the beginning there will be a lot of slice of life. You know world building if you want all cannon this is not for you. The Mc will have 2 girls but I’ll try and handle it as best I can, so if you have ideas for girls lmk.
Tags: romance, action, sliceoflife, action, drama, tragedy, 2girlsmax
Please enjoy, I own nothing everything belong to bleach and there respective creatures.
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writing this before i start reading since the synopsis said recommend a ship and i think soifon and yoruichi would be a good ship…if you have mc and yoruichi have a relationship before then soifon would be easy to add lol…anyway i’ll rewrite once i read some chapters for an honest review :)
Review after reading first 6 chapters it seems nice. Hope you keep it up. Will give another review after more chapters. . . ... . .
It was pretty good. The idea is really great and has a lot of potential. I think it could be very good, but the writing quality butchers it imo. I think like 90% of the sentences start with a verb that ends with “-ing” and most sentences aren’t really complete. Because of the misplaced periods and sentence structure, it reads kind of awkwardly. This can sort of be ignored for the most part, but during actions scenes, it ruins the flow of the story. Other than that, it’s pretty solid.
Good stuff, the writer know what he's doing. Good amount of drama, and the MC is a good one. ........................................
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slow but still good overall good work and keep at it my dude for more later i just hope by the end of this he will be the strongest in that world
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Already found it interesting from the synopsis itself keep going bro!!!..............................................................................
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After i rewatched bleach for the upcoming return i realized how poetic and melancholic it can be. The author perfectly captured that feeling in this fic. As for negatives the writing quaility and grammar could be better. Also some parts can be confusing at the start with the answers being hidden in the background and because of the grammar they fail to deliver. Even with these issues the story is great with character depth that you rarelly find in a fanfic
2 is a harem so tag it ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
note for new reader. boring, one man slow journey, nothing new. that's all. ......................................... . . . . ...
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for the two love interest/partner of the MC i humbly suggest Yoruichi and Soifon. Looking forward to you uploading a few more chapters. keep up the great work 😁👍