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To LOVE-Ru: System, debauchery and troubles

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作者: Rocky124

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Finding himself after his death in the body of Yuki Rito, the guy not only acquired a cute little sister who now needs to be taken care of, but also received the Perfect Human System.

And, apparently, even this is not enough for the universe. A divine artifact called the Notebook of Love appeared on the horizon, provided by the enchanting Goddess Freya...

The goal is simple: accumulate Attachment Points with the help of girls and develop at the expense of them!

More chapters can be read here: patreon.com/Rocky124

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Khayzer

Well I'll be the first to do a review because To Love-RU fanfics are very rare to see here, it has a standard reincarnation beginning, a system to improve and a goddess who observes it, it only has 4 chapters. At the moment there isn't much to say but it looks decent, the MC doesn't have the mentality of a Japanese so that's a plus. The only thing I can really criticize is that the grammar needs some work and I saw a few errors in the names.

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Tidas
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Pretty good their only a couple issues with formating, going back and forth with the characters first and last name witch can be kind of confusing

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