/ Fantasy / Timeless Celestial's Odyssey
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Wounded and frail, sleepless and starving, beset with complications, the journey of the 'Timeless Celestial', the harbinger of chaos and order, began in despairing conditions with nothing to hold on to other than a sincere hope.
Follow Ryne as he adventures the lands unknown, meeting characters that he would rather not have known, depending upon them to find his way back home.
Learning to take caution and make compromises, he hardens his will to rise to the top.
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I really got to say this here. This has the potential to be a best seller. I'm completely hooked by Rune's struggles and motivations. Kudos to the author, this has a lot more room for improvement and free creation. Will be waiting to see more.
To anyone reading this, be sure to give this one some time. Great work, must recommend. I especially relate to mc's depression and his efforts to change his situation for the better.
Trying my best to be critical here, the faults are much more hidden and the discrepancies are hard to notice. The main character's personality is not clearly shown, though that can be attributed to the fact that he's a kid, it can still be improved. Good luck author-san~
Just a first chapter and I could already feel your good writing skills. The book is well written. A journey of little boy who is thrown in to unfamiliar environment and in between harsh reality and tough situation. Will he survived this harsh situation on his own? How he fall in to such a situation? All the answers are in the book give it a try and read it I'm sure you will love it. Writing quality: the author has very good writing skills. You can feel it just by reading first chap. Updating stability: as far I have seen writer is updating book on regular basis. Story development: the story is starting when the boy - our male lead is just 6 years sold. As story continue we can experience his journey with him. Character design: There are many different characters as story develope and all of them were done nicely. And at the end best part of story is world background. ; Write has creat fictional fantasy world. All the details were mentioned that needed to mention to understand everything properly. In my words story is one of the finest and Atleast deserve one chance.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I planned to give it 4-stars at first but the latest chap changed my point of view upside down. It got a lot more potential for development. I'll be following it for updates.
The author does a great job at painting their visuals. I also enjoy how it feels like I'm walking right along with our MC. I'm as confused as he is, because we both have yet to know what is happening—I love it. The feeling of opening your eyes and being somewhere alien is more than enough to demand your curiosity and make you want to keep reading. I also love the author's notes at the end of every chapter. They're thoughtful and make you think. I can't wait to keep filling in the pieces and discover more of this world. You've got my follow ;)
First of all, even though I'm a fast reader, the style the author uses sort of forces you to slow down and really feel the despair and the hopelessness in the early chapters, and that is a good thing. While I will not put any spoilers in this review, I must say that I was positively surprised with the SUPREME style, the impeccable grammar, and the humor that is kind of sparkling from between the calamity and the serious stuff. Great work
WOOOW! This book is actually well-written! I was immediately hooked by the introduction, writing style, and even how the author described the world, expressions, and the characters! Kudos for the author~[img=recommend]
Your story deserves a five star because it is well written and has a lot of potential. The mc is clearly strong and had a hard life. It is a journey of a little boy who is thrown in to an unfamiliar environment and in between harsh reality, he is strong and i would 100% recommend your book. Keep up the good work and good luck author.
WARNING!! DO NOT BUY IN BATCHES there are +-5 Chapters “accidently” copied and arent deletable! The story is fun, well written, the Mc develops slow bit steady. Its a nice Novel 8/10 recommended. now gimme back my money 😂😂
The perspective change might seem harrowing at first to some readers but it would get better with time if you keep on reading. It's been quite some time since I've been working on this, so I'll really appreciate if you could give it a chance. Any queries, suggestions, hate, and disgust can be directed here in the replies.