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When a guy died by a truck, he was meet by R.O.B and he gets wishes from R.O.B, he want to be reincarnated as thor.
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I suggest the author, Write and write new books. And read comics whenever possible. Because the author sometimes greatly overestimates the strength of the characters even though they are not, also get to know the level of the characters (1A, 1B, and so on). Also read many other books to improve the quality of the writing.
This is not readable. The grammatical errors are one thing but all the misspellings make it tiring to read. The idea is very good. I like a good Thor fanfition and this has potential. Try to reread your chapters before you upload them. sincerely A loyal reader
Demasiado malo, creo que la peor historia que he leído, mala narrativa, no hay nada que atraiga a leer. Un mundo que no tiene sentido y personajes poco entretenidos
Its just bad ... . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. .. .. . . . . .
I'm so sorry little bro but this monster you created is beyon saving ... unreadable can't do read s a story with a lot of grammar mistakes. The MC is too OP at the beginning with no drawbacks it's also too good to be true. Because the MC is too poweful no development is possible.
The grammar on this doc is worse then translation novels the plot is non existent the MC becomes tier 1b on chapter three and I could not read beyond that due to all the reasons I have just listed
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Siendo sinceros falta saber de lo que uno escribe, además la trama me parece que es muy decepcionantes para el potencial que tiene la historia tratando de hacer todo más rápido cuando a veces necesita ponerle trama y sentido a todo ( sin contar sus villanos que son patéticos en pocas palabras )
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Honestly the writing quality of the first chapter was so bad I couldn't even get past it.
Yeah so this novel reads like it was written by a 13 year old, along with that the “5 wishes” was more like 8.
I lost brain cells reading this. It's written like a five year old who fell down the stairs multiple times and had a Concussion. You didn't use spell check you didn't Use any kind of grammar check. You kind of just slapped some sentences together. That sounded like words, and that's about it, right.
What the hell is this sheet I read now nothing well make for saving this novel is boring you can't understand anything in't don't react it's a waist of time.
The narrative lacks intrigue and the writing exhibits amateurish qualities. Although the idea of a wish fulfillment fanfic isn't inherently bad, the execution in this case is simply horrendous. The fanfic lacks a coherent structure, with the plot jumping haphazardly from one topic to another, resulting in a confusing reading experience. Furthermore, the presence of numerous grammar errors exacerbates the overall quality. The story fails to offer any meaningful character development or evoke genuine emotions in both the main and side characters. In my opinion, this novel is devoid of any thoughtful execution and therefore not worth reading