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作者: Niizawa

4.74 (21 レビュー結果)

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Niizawa
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Hi, author here writing a shameless review. The novel I'm writing right now is about a thirsty, blackbellied shou x cold, handsome, aloof gong. There is comedy, drama and a bit of mystery and action trinkled in as well. Hunter, is our seme MC, who has a difficult childhood causing him to become cold and distant most of the time. Leo, our uke ML, tries desparately to seduce MC. The story is mainly about the antics and school life of MC and ML, while there's also a side story on the MC's father (more mystery and action). Please support me by voting with power stones and leaving your reviews!

4yr
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ThirtyTyrants

This story is too much fun. Leo is certainly one who knows what he wants and goes after it. His interactions with Hunter are always hilarious and over the top, but there are some really sweet moments between the two of them that make you wish that he'd just get his act together and ask him out like a normal person haha. Hunter puts up with a lot, but it's clear he doesn't mind Leo's antics all that much. The plot is simple and slice of life but it doesn't make it any less engaging. I'm really curious to know more about Hunter's dad mysterious past.

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sam9kitsune

The book has had me hooked since the first page. Leo is hilarious and Hunter is a badass with a side of sweet for Leo. The story line is intriguing and keeps you going as you wait to see what Leo will say. As for Hunter he gets more mysterious as we go along. The side characters developments is just as good as the main characters. I can't wait for the continuation of the story. Lovely flow of a yaoi /bl novel

4yr
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8oni
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I am at chapter 25 and I already laughing so much. I have to read this alone or I will look like a maniac giggling alone while looking at phone. Dear author, thank you for bringing this masterpieces rofl, here takes this stars from me

3yr
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sweetykristy

I hardly write review but for this novel I m gonna write it. I m 30 chapters in, just in a single breathe. now it's doesn't require a brainer to understand how fabulous this novel really is. author is doing a mind blowing job. keep going. I m totally hooked up. being a shameless fujoshi, loving the hot scenes, compassion, love, understanding between the characters. I don't want to reveal spoiler so I m just gonna say this novel is totally on other level. whoever reading this comment you should give it a read you will not regret it, I can assure it.

3yr
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Tikader_sipra

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4yr
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Alienated9

The story would have been much better, but the writing quality is discouraging to read. The characters POV is almost in a third person POV. I'll give it to the author in regards to the humour. I'll be patience to continue, if it gets better, this review will be adjusted accordingly.

4yr
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ASliYA_HADJITAIB

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4yr
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Shelby_Lorene_Cain

Ahhhhh Love love Love the story abd the characters. The right blend of comedy romance and Everything in between. Highly recommend to everyone

4yr
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f1n
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Having read the synopsis I feel my windpipe being choked. . . Sure, I like the straightforwardness, but goddam! Having read 2% of the first chapter I now feel my upper body shuddering. Again sure, I like the straight into action "guns" banding, but author sama, my eyes. Having read about the eggplant I now feel my eyebrows going up and down as if they had taken some party drugs. At this point, I will say, this is a homosexual story. I almost made 3% into the story and It has left a lasting mark on my mind. . . Then again, what did I expect from a person whose profile picture is Lelouch. As a tip, learn to trust your readers a bit more. The part where he banged on the front door. Like we already know which door. Though can't say much adivese since I never got far.

4yr
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Neil_Ads

A good story with stable chapter update. I Recommend this to everyone.

4yr
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LinShui

This story is one of the funniest I've read in a while. :D It is in no way a literary masterpiece, but it kept me grinning like an idiot throughout the 10 chapters that I read, and I am glad that I read it. The characters are funny - especially love Hunter's inner monologue. It reads almost like a comic book, fast paced, full of surprises and an entertaining lead and love interest. There is also a good amount of mystery surrounding Hunter and his past. Like what happened to his mother? What does his father do for a living? I would recommend this to anyone who loves lighthearted romantic comedies with a lot of smut with some mystery on the side. Keep updating, author! :D

4yr
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greywhite

First was love and hate relationship and then it become a story with full of sweetness that make my tooth ache. hahaha 😂 How to become Leo who was so shameless with his love one 🤔❤️❤️

3yr
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Kib_Montecarlos

Welll, this was a nice story. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

4yr
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WantReadMore

The characters, their thoughts and actions are very well described. The plot development is also interesting and consistent. A good combination of comedy, drama, mysticism, a little detective, romance ... There is no feeling that something is superfluous or does not fit into the style / plot of the novel. I like it. Thanks for the novel.

4yr
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CheshireCat

That's fucking funny, I haven't read something that made me laugh so much in a long long time... The story is cool but the really juicy parts are the character interactions...

4yr
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dududdududddu

kyaahh i am literally screaming on the inside every chapter, Leo is just sooo cuteeee!!! It's good to see an uke that is much more active than the seme!! I wish they can finally get it on soon, im getting very impatient!

4yr
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angelalwk07

MOAAARRRRR UPDATESSSSS!!!! I really love the dynamic between the MC and ML. There’s also A LOT OF SMUTTTT!!! 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🍆🍆🍆👉👌🏼 If you want to see a lot of intimate action, this is definitely for you!!

4yr
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imlonely

LMFAO. This novel is so h*rny lol. There's already so much smex going on at the beginning that I need to bleach my eyes out! I can never look at an eggplant the same way anymore

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